[release-notes/gnome-2-28] Some corrections to rna11y

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit f9b0776a586268ede96b38bf060d1cf81a1ec170
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Wed Sep 2 13:10:52 2009 -0500

    Some corrections to rna11y

 help/C/rna11y.xml |   22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index e009ee5..b329102 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 	<para>
 	 GNOME has a passion for making software available to everyone, including
 	 users and developers with impairments that can make it harder to use their
-	 computer. To help, GNOME created the GNOME Accessibility Project and an
+	 computers. To help, GNOME created the GNOME Accessibility Project and an
 	 accessibility framework that is now a standard on libre desktops.
 	</para>
 
@@ -21,30 +21,30 @@
 	</para>
 
 	<sect2 id="rna11y.orca">
-	 <title>Orca Screenreader</title>
+	 <title>Orca Screen Reader</title>
 
 	 <para>
-	  The <application>Orca</application> screenreader has had significant
+	  The <application>Orca</application> screen reader has had significant
 		work done to reduce program bugs and improve performance, with over 140 bugs
 		fixed for GNOME &gnomeversion;. Some of the improvements include:
 	 </para>
 	 <itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem><para>
-		 New support for different progress bar "verbosity levels" to allow you to control 
-		 whether progress bar updates should be spoken even if the progress bar is not in the active window;
+     new support for different progress bar "verbosity levels" to allow you to control 
+		 whether progress bar updates should be spoken even if the progress bar is not in the active window
 		</para></listitem>
 		<listitem><para>
-		 ability to move the mouse without performing a click;
+		 ability to move the mouse without performing a click
 		</para></listitem>
 		<listitem><para>
-		 support for mouseovers, including the ability to interact with an item displayed in the mouseover;
+		 support for mouseovers, including the ability to interact with an item displayed in the mouseover
 		</para></listitem>
 	  <listitem><para>
-		 presentation of misspelled words when editing text;
+		 presentation of misspelled words when editing text
 		</para></listitem>
 		<listitem><para>
-		 the speech and Braille generators have been re-written, and one improved feature is 
-		 speech support now also includes the ability to play sounds; and
+     completely rewritten speech and Braille generators, now with the ability to play
+     sounds in the speech generator
 		</para></listitem>
 	 </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
   
   
   <sect2 id="rna11y.webkit">
-  	 <title>Webkit Accessibility Support</title>
+  	 <title>WebKit Accessibility Support</title>
   	 
 	<para>Significant effort has been done to improve WebKit accessibility, in particular
 			the addition of caret navigation and the initial implementation of Atk's