[release-notes/gnome-2-28] minor fixes (code & language)

[Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>]

commit c6fc635f3c21d6383a7fd86e810414d1cb36faab
Author: Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>
Date:   Wed Sep 2 07:42:08 2009 -0500

    minor fixes (code & language)

 help/C/release-notes.xml  |    2 +-
 help/C/rninstallation.xml |   45 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 help/C/rnusers.xml        |    4 ++--
 3 files changed, 48 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index f759329..b1038d7 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
 		<!-- Internationalization -->
 		<include href="rni18n.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 		<!-- Installing GNOME -->
-		<!-- include href="rninstallation.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/ -->
+		<include href="rninstallation.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 		<!-- Known Issues -->
 		<!-- Looking to the future: -->
 		<include href="rnlookingforward.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/help/C/rninstallation.xml b/help/C/rninstallation.xml
new file mode 100644
index 0000000..134450e
--- /dev/null
+++ b/help/C/rninstallation.xml
@@ -0,0 +1,45 @@
+<?xml version="1.0"?>
+<!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN"
+  "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.1.2/docbookx.dtd"; [
+<!ENTITY urlfiguresbase "figures/">
+<!ENTITY gnomeversion "2.28">
+]>
+
+<sect1 id="rninstallation">
+	<title>Installing GNOME</title>
+
+	<para>
+		You can try out GNOME &gnomeversion; with the LiveCD, which contains all of the software
+		included in GNOME &gnomeversion; on a single CD.  You can boot your computer directly
+    from the LiveCD without installing anything.
+    The LiveCD can be downloaded from the GNOME
+		<ulink url="http://torrent.gnome.org/";>BitTorrent site</ulink>.
+	</para>
+
+	<para>
+		To install or upgrade your machine to GNOME &gnomeversion;, we recommend you install
+		official packages from your vendor or distribution. Popular distributions
+		will make GNOME &gnomeversion; available very soon, and some already have
+		development versions with GNOME &gnomeversion; available. You can get a list of
+		distributions that ship GNOME and discover the latest versions they ship on our
+		<ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/footware.shtml";>Get Footware</ulink>
+		page.
+	</para>
+
+	<para>
+		If you are brave and patient, and would like to build GNOME from source,
+		we recommend you use one of the build tools.
+		<ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/projects/garnome/";>GARNOME</ulink> builds GNOME
+		from release tarballs. You will need GARNOME &gnomeversion;.x to build GNOME &gnomeversion;.x.
+		There is also <ulink
+		url="http://library.gnome.org/devel/jhbuild/";>JHBuild</ulink>, which is
+		designed to build the latest GNOME from SVN. You can use JHBuild to build
+		GNOME &gnomeversion;.x by using the <filename>gnome-&gnomeversion;</filename> moduleset.
+	</para>
+
+  <para>
+	  While it is possible to build GNOME directly from the release tarballs, we
+		strongly recommend the use of one of the build tools above.
+	</para>
+</sect1>
+<!-- vi:set tw=80 ts=2: -->
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 4cb6066..31c14a1 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 		</para>
 		
 		<para>
-		<application>GNOME Bluetooth</application> also includes support for internet access
+		GNOME Bluetooth also includes support for internet access
 		through your mobile phone.  After pairing your mobile phone with GNOME Bluetooth,
 		 Network Manager will include an entry to use your mobile phone
 		 for internet access.
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 	</sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="rnusers.hamster">
-	 <title>Track Your Time Even Better</title>
+	 <title>Track Your Time Better</title>
 
 	 <para>
 	  The <application>Time Tracker</application> applet, also known as Project Hamster,