[release-notes/gnome-2-28] updated looking forward

[Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>]

commit 29c67eeb82ac4cfd1eb1586f98499e23dfd78695
Author: Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 1 13:18:07 2009 -0500

    updated looking forward

 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |   22 ++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index 0531c2b..54b8eeb 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -23,20 +23,16 @@
 	
 	<para>GNOME 2.30 will continue to provide the desktop platform and applications it always has, and will
 	also potentially feature a new user interface in GNOME Shell and the GNOME Activity Journal which easily helps you browse
-	and find files on your computer.  For developers, GNOME 2.30 deprecates a number of old libraries. 
-		<!-- Fix me - update for developers -->
-		
+	and find files on your computer.  For developers, GNOME 2.30 deprecates a number of old libraries. 		
 	</para>
 
-	<!-- Fix me - how do you run the GNOME Shell beta in GNOME 2.28 - Also add screenshot - Finalize decision on whether to include -->
-
-	<para>A beta preview of GNOME Shell is available in &gnomeversion;.  GNOME Shell features an innovative new
+	<para>A preview of GNOME Shell is available in &gnomeversion; and is available for download.  
+	GNOME Shell features an innovative new
 	user interface using the power of a composited desktop.  GNOME Shell makes it easy to add additional workspaces,
 	start frequently used applications, and access your most used files and documents.
 	</para>
 	
-	<para>GNOME Shell is available for testing
-	</para>
+			<!-- Fix me - add GNOME Shell screenshot? -->
 	
 	<para>The GNOME Activity Journal is a tool for easily browsing and finding files on your computer. 
 	It keeps a chronological journal of all file activity and supports tagging and establishing 
@@ -45,7 +41,11 @@
 	bookmarking items.
 	</para>
 	
-	<!-- Fixme - Add Activity Journal Screenshot -->
+	<!-- Fixme - Add Activity Journal Screenshot? -->
+	
+	<para>Tomboy Online is also scheduled for GNOME 2.30 and will allow users to sync and access their
+	Tomboy Notes via the web.
+	</para>
 
 	<para>
 		<ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/RoadMap";>GNOME's roadmap</ulink> details the developers' 
@@ -54,9 +54,7 @@
 	earlier this year and is <ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/start/unstable";>available on the GNOME wiki</ulink>.
 	</para>
 	
-	<para>Tomboy Online is also scheduled for GNOME 2.30 and will allow users to sync and access their
-	Tomboy Notes via the web.
-	</para>
+
 		
 
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