[gnomeweb-wml] cheese: fix some grammar mistakes

[Daniel G. Siegel <dgsiegel src gnome org>]

commit 04dd35103c85b2253764d8281cef5eca83aeb584
Author: daniel g. siegel <dgsiegel gnome org>
Date:   Sat Oct 3 10:06:53 2009 +0200

    cheese: fix some grammar mistakes

 projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml |   18 +++++++++---------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml b/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml
index 1d82581..d824c81 100644
--- a/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml
+++ b/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
           <p>
           Sick and tired of looking at the same face over and over again?
           Want it to be something else? Cheese allows
-          you to add many different effects to photos, even multiple at a time! There are
+          you to add many different effects to photos, even several at a time! There are
           heaps of effect combinations to choose from that will keep you smiling.
           Morph yourself into Hulk or a nice pink alien, or even pile up effects in
           order to obtain the most amazing results!
@@ -71,9 +71,9 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Cheese got a new feature: the burst mode!
+          Cheese has got a new feature: burst mode!
           From now on you can watch foxes walking in your garden, people
-          getting drunk over time at your party or have many photos to laugh
+          getting drunk over time at your party or have many photos to laugh at
           afterwards. Just set the amount of photos you want to be taken and
           the time delay and Cheese will take them.
           </p>
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Cheese does not only allow you to take great photos, but it also allows you to take
+          Not only does Cheese allow you to take great photos, but it also allows you to take
           videos. Effects, sharing, and everything that you can do with photos you can
-          also do with videos as well. Instead of preparing for that one
+          do with videos as well. Instead of preparing for that one
           moment, invite some friends, record your session and laugh about it afterwards.
           So Mr. Kubrick, go ahead and present us your new
           Hollywood-movie! Or do you want to be a music star and record the
@@ -108,10 +108,10 @@
           </div>
           <p>
           We have optimized our User Interface especially for Netbook users
-          in order to have an awesome experience on small displays too.
-          Sitting in a cafe together with your friends, travelling in a train or
-          just sitting in a hotel lobby, these are all great places to try out
-          Cheese! There are no excuses anymore, as most Netbook's come with an
+          in order to create an awesome experience on small displays too.
+          You can try Cheese out sitting in a cafe with your friends, travelling in a train or
+          just sitting in a hotel lobby.
+          There are no excuses anymore, as most netbooks come with an
           integrated webcam.
           </p>
         </div>