[gcalctool] Fix grammatical errors (Bruce Cowan, Bug #569275)



commit 61f595727c414034a2359a8ef372f2e6c2fb76dc
Author: Robert Ancell <robert ancell gmail com>
Date:   Thu May 14 10:03:55 2009 +1000

    Fix grammatical errors (Bruce Cowan, Bug #569275)
---
 help/C/gcalctool.xml |   10 +++++-----
 help/ChangeLog       |    3 ++-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/gcalctool.xml b/help/C/gcalctool.xml
index 67bfce4..e2955c1 100644
--- a/help/C/gcalctool.xml
+++ b/help/C/gcalctool.xml
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@
 </para>
       <note>
       <para>Different countries and cultures have varying conventions for how to communicate. These conventions include the language spoken and the character used as a numeric separator.</para>
-      <para>&app; has been internationalized so user's can adapt to their own conventions. This is done by setting a specific locale. We can't determine what locales will exist, except for a standard one called the C locale.</para>
+      <para>&app; has been internationalized so users can adapt to their own conventions. This is done by setting a specific locale. We can't determine what locales will exist, except for a standard one called the C locale.</para>
       <para>When you use the C locale, the separator character is not displayed.</para>
       </note>
     </sect3>
@@ -1850,7 +1850,7 @@ To change the sign of the exponent (the power to which the number is raised) use
     </sect3>
     <sect3 id="gcalctool-calc-bit-manipulation-ext">
       <title>To Perform Bit Manipulations on Integers</title>
-      <para>If the calculator display shows an integer value, then each of the bits in that integer value is displayed as a collection of 0's and 1's in the Bit Editor. By clicking on any of these individual bits, their value can be toggled, causing the displayed integer value to be adjusted accordingly.</para>
+      <para>If the calculator display shows an integer value, then each of the bits in that integer value is displayed as a collection of 0s and 1s in the Bit Editor. By clicking on any of these individual bits, their value can be toggled, causing the displayed integer value to be adjusted accordingly.</para>
     </sect3>
     <sect3 id="gcalctool-logic-calc"> 
       <title>To Perform Bitwise Calculations</title> 
@@ -2054,11 +2054,11 @@ To change the sign of the exponent (the power to which the number is raised) use
                          <guimenu>Edit</guimenu>
                          <guimenuitem>Undo</guimenuitem>
                   </menuchoice>.  You can undo up to 15 past actions.</para>
-                <para>If you want to redo an action you just undo'ed, choose
+                <para>If you want to redo an action you have just undone, choose
                   <menuchoice>
                          <guimenu>Edit</guimenu>
                          <guimenuitem>Redo</guimenuitem>
-                  </menuchoice>. You can redo up to 15 undo'ed actions.</para>
+                  </menuchoice>. You can redo up to 15 undone actions.</para>
   </sect2>
 <!-- ============= Quitting ============================= -->
   <sect2 id="gcalctool-quit"> 
@@ -2792,7 +2792,7 @@ be reset to decimal.</para>
                            <row valign="top">
                              <entry><para><keycombo><keycap>Shift</keycap><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>z</keycap></keycombo></para></entry>
                              <entry><para> <menuchoice> <guimenu>Edit</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Redo</guimenuitem> </menuchoice> </para></entry>
-                             <entry><para>Redo an undo'ed action</para> </entry>
+                             <entry><para>Redo an undone action</para> </entry>
                              <entry><para><xref linkend="gcalctool-undo-redo"/></para> </entry>
                            </row>
                          </tbody>
diff --git a/help/ChangeLog b/help/ChangeLog
index 26c6aa8..d4c756c 100644
--- a/help/ChangeLog
+++ b/help/ChangeLog
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
-2009-03-17 Robert Ancell <robert ancell gmail com>
+2009-05-14 Robert Ancell <robert ancell gmail com>
 
 	* C/gcalctool.xml: Remove references to arithmetic/left-to-right precedence
 	  from the manual (Robert Ancell, Bug #559734)
+	* C/gcalctool.xml: Fix grammatical errors (Bruce Cowan, Bug #569275)
 
 2009-05-04 Robin Sonefors <ozamosi flukkost nu>
 



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