[gnome-system-monitor] Updated manual

[Milo Casagrande <miloc src gnome org>]

commit b6a48f41ad9236a738e11cbe31ca9f7fddd537b6
Author: Milo Casagrande <milo ubuntu com>
Date:   Tue May 5 22:16:25 2009 +0200

    Updated manual
    
    Applied patch from Paul Cutler to close bug 500559 and 515603
    Added some menuchoice tag missing preventi correct display of menu
    Fixed some filesystem in file system (as from the glossary)
    Fixed a User instead of Used
---
 help/C/gnome-system-monitor.xml |  119 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 89 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)

diff --git a/help/C/gnome-system-monitor.xml b/help/C/gnome-system-monitor.xml
index 51c620f..d022a5c 100644
--- a/help/C/gnome-system-monitor.xml
+++ b/help/C/gnome-system-monitor.xml
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 <!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.1.2//EN" 
 "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.1.2/docbookx.dtd"; [
   <!ENTITY legal SYSTEM "legal.xml">
-  <!ENTITY appversion "2.5.2">
-  <!ENTITY manrevision "2.1">
-  <!ENTITY date "February 2004">
+  <!ENTITY appversion "2.24.4">
+  <!ENTITY manrevision "2.2">
+  <!ENTITY date "March 2009">
   <!ENTITY app "System Monitor">
 ]>
 
@@ -23,6 +23,10 @@
     <title>&app; Manual V&manrevision;</title>       
 
     <copyright>
+      <year>2009</year>
+      <holder>Paul Cutler</holder>
+    </copyright>
+    <copyright>
       <year>2004</year>
       <holder>Sun Microsystems</holder>
     </copyright>
@@ -60,6 +64,14 @@
       <surname>Day</surname> 
       <affiliation><address><email>billday bellatlantic net</email></address></affiliation> 
     </author> 
+      <author>
+        <firstname>Paul</firstname>
+        <surname>Cutler</surname>
+        <affiliation>
+          <orgname>GNOME Documentation Project</orgname>
+          <address><email>pcutler foresightlinux org</email></address>
+        </affiliation>
+      </author>
       
 <!-- This is appropriate place for other contributors: translators,
      maintainers,  etc. Commented out by default.
@@ -76,38 +88,52 @@
 -->
     </authorgroup>
 
+    <releaseinfo revision="2.28" role="review">
+      <ulink type="review" url="http://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=500559"/>
+    </releaseinfo>
+
     <revhistory>
       <revision> 
 	<revnumber>System Monitor Manual V&manrevision;</revnumber> 
-	<date>&date;</date> 
+	<date>March 2009</date>
 	<revdescription> 
-	  <para role="author">Sun GNOME Documentation Team</para>
+	  <para role="author">Paul Cutler
+	    <email>pcutler foresightlinux org</email>
+	  </para>
 	  <para role="publisher">GNOME Documentation Project</para>
 	</revdescription> 
       </revision> 
       <revision> 
-	<revnumber>System Monitor Manual V2.0</revnumber> 
-	<date>November 2002</date> 
-	<revdescription> 
-	  <para role="author">Bill Day 
-	    <email>billday bellatlantic net</email>
+	<revnumber>System Monitor Manual V2.1</revnumber>
+	<date>February 2004</date>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <para role="author">Sun GNOME Documentation Team</para>
+	  <para role="publisher">GNOME Documentation Project</para>
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
+      <revision>
+	<revnumber>System Monitor Manual V2.0</revnumber>
+	<date>November 2002</date>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <para role="author">Bill Day <email>billday bellatlantic net</email>
 	  </para>
 	  <para role="publisher">GNOME Documentation Project</para>
-	</revdescription> 
-      </revision> 
-      <revision> 
-	<revnumber>Procman Manual V0.11</revnumber> 
-	<date>January 2002</date> 
-	<revdescription> 
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
+      <revision>
+	<revnumber>Procman Manual V0.11</revnumber>
+	<date>January 2002</date>
+	<revdescription>
 	  <para role="author">Bill Day 
 	    <email>billday bellatlantic net</email>
 	  </para>
 	  <para role="publisher">GNOME Documentation Project</para>
-	</revdescription> 
-      </revision> 
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
     </revhistory> 
 
-    <releaseinfo>This manual describes version &appversion; of &app;.
+    <releaseinfo>
+      This manual describes version &appversion; of &app;.
     </releaseinfo> 
 
     <legalnotice> 
@@ -120,7 +146,11 @@
 
     </legalnotice> 
     <abstract role="description">
-      <para>User manual for &app;</para>
+      <para>
+	&app; gives users a graphical user interface for monitoring CPU,
+	network, and memory activities as well as a way for viewing
+	and stopping system processes.
+      </para>
     </abstract>
   </articleinfo> 
 
@@ -243,7 +273,7 @@
         </term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Lists all mounted filesystems along with basic information about each.
+            Lists all mounted file systems along with basic information about each.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -326,7 +356,7 @@
                   <guilabel>Processes</guilabel>
                 </para>
                 <para>
-                  Contains a list of processes organized as a table, a list of load averages over the past few minutes, and an "End Process" button.
+                  Contains a list of processes organized as a table, a list of load averages over the past few minutes, and an <guibutton>End Process</guibutton> button.
                 </para>
               </listitem>
               <listitem>
@@ -373,8 +403,25 @@
         To display basic system information, select the <guilabel>System</guilabel> tab.
       </para>
       <para>
-        In the <guilabel>System</guilabel> tab, information is organized into three groups, 
+        In the <guilabel>System</guilabel> tab, information is organized into three groups:
       </para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    System Information
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    Hardware
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    System Status
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2 id="gnome-system-monitor-display-processlist">
@@ -496,7 +543,11 @@
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>
-              Choose <guimenu>View</guimenu><guimenuitem>All Processes</guimenuitem>.
+              Choose
+	      <menuchoice>
+		<guimenu>View</guimenu>
+		<guimenuitem>All Processes</guimenuitem>
+	      </menuchoice>.
             </para>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
@@ -515,7 +566,11 @@
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>
-              Choose <guimenu>View</guimenu><guimenuitem>My Processes</guimenuitem>.
+              Choose 
+	      <menuchoice>
+		<guimenu>View</guimenu>
+		<guimenuitem>My Processes</guimenuitem>
+	      </menuchoice>.
             </para>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
@@ -534,7 +589,11 @@
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <para>
-              Choose <guimenu>View</guimenu><guimenuitem>Active Processes</guimenuitem>.
+              Choose 
+	      <menuchoice>
+		<guimenu>View</guimenu>
+		<guimenuitem>Active Processes</guimenuitem>
+	      </menuchoice>.
             </para>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
@@ -700,7 +759,7 @@
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>
-          <term><guilabel>VM offset</guilabel></term>
+          <term><guilabel>VM Offset</guilabel></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>
               The virtual memory offset of the memory segment.
@@ -865,7 +924,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            User memory out of total memory
+            Used memory out of total memory
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
@@ -929,7 +988,7 @@
             Type
           </term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Filesystem type</para>
+            <para>File system type</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -1382,7 +1441,7 @@
                     <guilabel>Show all filesystems</guilabel>
                   </para>
                   <para>
-                    Select this option to show all filesystems, including temporary and system ones.
+                    Select this option to show all file systems, including temporary and system ones.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </itemizedlist>