release-notes r1266 - in branches/gnome-2-26: . help/C

[davyd svn gnome org]

Author: davyd
Date: Sat Mar  7 02:45:34 2009
New Revision: 1266
URL: http://svn.gnome.org/viewvc/release-notes?rev=1266&view=rev

Log:
2009-03-07  Davyd Madeley  <davyd madeley id au>

        * help/C/rnusers.xml:
        - edits to Extensive Burning


Modified:
   branches/gnome-2-26/ChangeLog
   branches/gnome-2-26/help/C/rnusers.xml

Modified: branches/gnome-2-26/help/C/rnusers.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/gnome-2-26/help/C/rnusers.xml	(original)
+++ branches/gnome-2-26/help/C/rnusers.xml	Sat Mar  7 02:45:34 2009
@@ -17,29 +17,33 @@
 	</para>
 
 	<sect2 id="rnusers.brasero">
-		<title>Extensive burning abilities</title>
+		<title>Extensive Burning Abilities</title>
 		<!-- XXX - what about Blue Ray? -->
 		<para>
-			Previous GNOME versions already had an easy to use way to burn CD's and
-			DVD's. As of GNOME &gnomeversion; this has been expanded to include a
-			whole application dedicated to just burn CD's and DVD's. It offers the
-			ability to create Auto CD's, etc. <!-- XXX list features that weren't
-			supported by nautilus-cd-burner -->
+		  Although
+			previous versions of GNOME already had an easy way to burn CDs and
+			DVDs, as of GNOME &gnomeversion; this has been expanded to a
+			whole application dedicated to disc creation,
+			<application>Brasero</application>.
+			<!-- XXX list features that weren't supported by nautilus-cd-burner -->
 		</para>
+		<!-- FIXME: screenshot -->
 
 		<para>
 			People who appreciated the way CD burning used to work will not have to
-			relearn their habits; it is still possible to see <!-- XXX rephrase 'see'
-			--> the previous interface. Clicking Places-&lt;<!-- XXX --> still brings
-			up the same window. Right clicking an .iso file will still produce a
-			similar easy dialog.
+			relearn their habits; the existing interfaces are also available.
+			<menuchoice><guimenu>Places</guimenu><guimenuitem>CD/DVD
+			Creator</guimenuitem></menuchoice> in the menu still brings
+			up a folder you can drag into. CD (ISO) image files can still be burnt
+			directly from the file manager by right clicking on them.
 		</para>
 
 		<para>
-			Thanks to the addition of Brasero, various GNOME applications have added
-			burning capabilities. Want to burn that the movie you're watching in the
-			Media Player? You can do so as either a (S)VCD or DVD.
+			Brasero allows other GNOME applications to add disc burning capabilities.
+			For example, the Media Player now allows you to burn the movie you're
+			watching to either (S)VCD or DVD.
 		</para>
+		<!-- FIXME: screenshot -->
 
 	</sect2>