[gimp-help-2] Improved and simplified wording in English for paths.xml, qmas, .xml, and selections.xml.



commit 6162c82552e5dd60b1a6fc7d1c8ccb0a30be4ebb
Author: Andrew Pitonyak <andrew pitonyak org>
Date:   Tue Dec 15 20:04:26 2009 -0500

    Improved and simplified wording in English for paths.xml, qmas,.xml, and selections.xml.

 src/using/paths.xml      |  127 +++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 src/using/qmask.xml      |   16 +++---
 src/using/selections.xml |   37 +++++++++++---
 3 files changed, 108 insertions(+), 72 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/src/using/paths.xml b/src/using/paths.xml
index 5b9c2be..7ece0ce 100644
--- a/src/using/paths.xml
+++ b/src/using/paths.xml
@@ -25,31 +25,30 @@
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>
-    Paths are curves (known as Bézier-curves). In <acronym>GIMP</acronym> it's
-    very easy to learn and to use them. To understand their concepts and
-    mechanism you can go to the glossary
-    <link linkend="glossary-bezier-curve">Bézier-curve</link> or to Wikipedia
+    Paths are curves (known as Bézier-curves). Paths are easy to learn and use
+    in <acronym>GIMP</acronym>. To understand their concepts and
+    mechanism, look at the glossary
+    <link linkend="glossary-bezier-curve">Bézier-curve</link> or Wikipedia
     <xref linkend="bibliography-online-wkpd-bezier"/>.
-    It is a very powerful tool to design sophisticated forms. To use it in
-    <acronym>GIMP</acronym> you must operate by two successive ways: 1st
-    Create the path and 2nd Stroke path.
+    The Paths tool is very powerful, allowing you to design sophisticated
+    forms. To use the Paths tool in <acronym>GIMP</acronym>, you must first
+    create a path, and then stroke the path.
   </para>
   <para>
-    According to the terminology used in <acronym>GIMP</acronym>,
-    <quote>Stroke path</quote> means here to apply a specific style to the
-    path (color, width, pattern... ).
+    In <acronym>GIMP</acronym>, the term <quote>Stroke path</quote>, means to
+    apply a specific style to the path (color, width, pattern... ).
   </para>
   <para>
-    Paths are used for two main purposes:
+    A Path has two main purposes:
   </para>
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>A closed path can be converted into a selection.</para>
+      <para>You can convert a closed path to a selection.</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        An open or closed path can be <emphasis>stroked</emphasis>,
-        that is, painted on the image, in a variety of ways.
+        Any path, open or closed, can be <emphasis>stroked</emphasis>;
+        that is, painted on the image in a variety of ways.
       </para>
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
@@ -70,66 +69,84 @@
   </figure>
 
   <sect2 id="gimp-using-paths-creating">
-    <title>Path Creating</title>
+    <title>Path Creation</title>
     <para>
-      At this step you can design a skeleton of wished form; this skeleton
-      will be modified later by various ways. To do this you can go to
-      <link linkend="gimp-tool-path">Paths</link>.
-      A short example will be useful to understand the creating process.
+      Start by drawing the outline for your path; the outline
+      can be modified later (see the 
+      <link linkend="gimp-tool-path">Paths</link> tool).
+      To start, select the Paths tool using one of the following methods:
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          In the image menu, click
+          Use
           <menuchoice>
             <guimenu>Tools</guimenu>
             <guimenuitem>Path</guimenuitem>
-          </menuchoice>,
+          </menuchoice>
+          from the image menu.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          or on the relevant icon
+          Use the relevant icon
           <guiicon>
             <inlinegraphic fileref="images/toolbox/stock-tool-path-22.png"/>
-          </guiicon> in toolbox,
+          </guiicon> in toolbox.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>or use hotkey <keycap>B</keycap></para>
+        <para>Use the hotkey <keycap>B</keycap></para>.
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     <para>
-      Your pointer changes into a pen feature with a curve beginning; if you
-      left-click in the image you print a point (white inner circle with a
-      black border); moving mouse and left-clicking again you create
-      automatically a second point linked to previous one. You can carry on as
-      often as you wish it to design a polyline, but to learn you need two
-      points only. Now if you approach pointer close to segment ranging
-      between the two points, the little <quote>+</quote>
-      close to pointer changes into a cross (for moving). Now press down left
-      button moving pointer to any side.
+      When the Paths tool is selected, the mouse cursor 
+      changes into a pointer (arrow) with a curve. 
+      Left click in the image to create the first point on the path. Move
+      the mouse to a new point and left click the mouse to create another
+      point linked to the previous point. Although you can create as many
+      points as you desire, you only need two points to learn about Paths.
+      While adding points, the mouse cursor has a little <quote>+</quote>
+      next to the curve, which indicates that clicking will add a new
+      point. When the mouse cursor is close to a line segment, the
+      <quote>+</quote> changes into a cross with arrows; like the move tool.
     </para>
     <para>
-      Then two events occur. One is a bending of the segment to the moving
-      direction and this bending is proportional to displacement. The
-      second reveals two segments ended with squares (named handles) at the
-      two curve ends . If you place the mouse pointer on these squares it
-      changes into a pointing finger. Now, if you click-and-drag you can see
-      the consequence on the curve feature. By this mean you can change the
-      starting curve orientation as well as its <quote>lengthening</quote>
-      on modified side.
+      Move the mouse cursor close to a line segment, left-click and drag
+      the line segment. Two events occur.
+      <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>The line segment bends and curves as it is pulled.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          Each line segment has a start point and an end point that is
+          clearly labeled. A <quote>direction line</quote> now
+          projects from each end point for the line segment that was
+          moved. 
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
+    The curved line segment leaves an end point in the same direction that
+    the <quote>direction line</quote> leaves the end point.
+    The length of the <quote>direction line</quote> controls how far the
+    line segment projects along the <quote>direction line</quote> before
+    curving toward the other end point.
+    Each <quote>direction line</quote> has an empty square box (called a
+    handle) on one end. Click and drag a handle to change the direction and
+    length of a <quote>direction line</quote>.
     </para>
     <figure>
-      <title>Appearance of a path while being manipulated</title>
+      <title>Appearance of a path while it is manipulated</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
           <imagedata fileref="images/using/path-with-anchors.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <caption>
           <para>
-            Appearance of a path while it is being manipulated using the Path
-            tool.
+            Appearance of a path while it is manipulated using the Path tool.
+            The path is comprised of two components with both straight and
+            curved segments.
           </para>
         </caption>
       </mediaobject>
@@ -137,27 +154,23 @@
     <!--TRANSLATORS: check glossary.po for a translation of this para-->
     <para>
       Paths can be created and manipulated using the
-      <link linkend="gimp-tool-path">Path tool</link>.
-      The image above shows a path which consists of two components, having
-      both straight and curved segments, being worked on with the Path tool.
-      Black squares are anchor points, the open circle indicates the selected
-      anchor and the two open squares are the two handles which are associated
-      with this anchor from the curves on either side of it.
+      <link linkend="gimp-tool-path">Path tool</link>. Black squares are
+      anchor points, the open circle indicates the selected anchor, and the
+      two open squares are the handles associated with the selected anchor.
     </para>
-
     <para>
       Paths, like layers and channels, are components of an image. When an
-      image is saved in GIMP's native XCF file format, any paths it has are
-      saved along with it. The list of paths in an image can be viewed and
-      operated on using the
+      image is saved in <acronym>GIMP</acronym>'s native XCF file format, any
+      paths it has are saved with it. The list of paths in an image can be
+      viewed and operated on using the
       <link linkend="gimp-path-dialog">Paths dialog</link>.
-      If you want to move a path from one image to another, you can do so by
+      You can move move a path from one image to another by
       copying and pasting using the pop-up menu in the Paths dialog, or by
-      dragging an icon from the Paths dialog into the destination image's
+      dragging an icon from the Paths dialog into the destination image
       window.
     </para>
     <para>
-      GIMP paths belong to a mathematical type called
+      <acronym>GIMP</acronym> paths belong to a mathematical type called
       <quote>Bezier paths</quote>. What this means in practical terms is that
       they are defined by <emphasis>anchors</emphasis> and
       <emphasis>handles</emphasis>. <quote>Anchors</quote> are points the path
diff --git a/src/using/qmask.xml b/src/using/qmask.xml
index 04a6400..3b8e93d 100644
--- a/src/using/qmask.xml
+++ b/src/using/qmask.xml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 -->
 <sect1 id="gimp-using-quickmask">
   <title>
-    <phrase>Using the QuickMask</phrase>
+    <phrase>Using QuickMask Mode</phrase>
   </title>
   <indexterm>
     <primary>Masks</primary>
@@ -21,26 +21,26 @@
     </step>
     <step>
       <para>
-        Activate the QuickMask using the left-bottom button in the image
+        Activate QuickMask mode using the left-bottom button in the image
         window. If a selection is present the mask is initialized with the
         content of the selection.
       </para>
     </step>
     <step>
       <para>
-        Choose any drawing tool. Paint on the Quick Mask using black color to
-        remove selected areas and white color to add selected areas. You can
-        use grey colors to get partially selected areas.
+        Choose any drawing tool. Paint on the QuickMask with black to
+        remove selected areas, and paint with white to add selected
+        areas. Use grey colors to partially select areas.
       </para>
       <para>
         You can also use selection tools and fill these selections with the
-        Bucket Fill tool. This does not destroy the Qmask selections!
+        Bucket Fill tool; this does not destroy the QuickMask selections!
       </para>
     </step>
     <step>
       <para>
-        Toggle off the QuickMask using the left-bottom button in the image
-        window: the selection will be displayed with its marching ants.
+        Toggle QuickMask mode off using the left-bottom button in the image
+        window: the selection will be displayed with marching ants.
       </para>
     </step>
   </procedure>
diff --git a/src/using/selections.xml b/src/using/selections.xml
index 81d4e5a..9745f93 100644
--- a/src/using/selections.xml
+++ b/src/using/selections.xml
@@ -170,9 +170,32 @@
     </indexterm>
 
     <para>
-      When drawing a selection, you can add a part of the image
-      or subtract a part of the selection by holding the
-      <keycap>Shift</keycap> or the <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> keyboard keys down:
+      Tools have options that you can configure.
+      Each selection tool allows you to set the selection mode. The
+      following selection modes are supported:
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem><para>
+          Replace is the most used selection mode. In replace mode,
+          a selection replaces any existing selection.
+        </para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>
+          Add mode, causes new selections to be added to any existing
+          selection. Press and hold the <keycap>Shift</keycap> key while
+          making a selection to temporarily enter add mode.
+        </para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>
+          Subtract mode, causes new selections to be removed from any existing
+          selection. Press and hold the <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> key while
+          making a selection to temporarily enter subtract mode.
+        </para></listitem>
+        <listitem><para>
+          Intersect mode, causes areas in both the new and
+          existing selection to become the new selection.
+          Press and hold both the <keycap>Shift</keycap> and
+          <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> key while
+          making a selection to temporarily enter intersect mode.
+        </para></listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
     </para>
 
     <figure>
@@ -185,10 +208,10 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
     <para>
-      A rectangular has been drawn. Then the Lasso is selected and a free hand
-      selection is drawn, holding the <keycap>Shift</keycap> key down,
-      including a part of the rectangular selection. As soon as you release
-      the mouse button, both selections are added.
+      The figure shows an existing rectangular selection.
+      Select the Lasso. While pressing the <keycap>Shift</keycap>
+      key, make a free hand selection that includes the existing selection.
+      Release the mouse button and areas are included in the selection.
     </para>
     <note>
       <para>



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