[release-notes/gnome-2-28] fixed validation, typos and added Tomboy to looking ahead

[Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>]

commit be0e838223d524d66f7bafbae267a0d311e31d05
Author: Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>
Date:   Mon Aug 24 22:36:04 2009 -0500

    fixed validation, typos and added Tomboy to looking ahead

 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |    6 +++++-
 help/C/rnusers.xml          |   17 +++++------------
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index cc05267..522a9cd 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 	start frequently used applications, and access your most used files and documents.
 	</para>
 	
-	<para>GNOME Shell is availabe for testing
+	<para>GNOME Shell is available for testing
 	<!-- Fix me - how do you run the GNOME Shell beta in GNOME 2.28 - Also add screenshot -->
 	</para>
 	
@@ -44,6 +44,10 @@
 		<ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/RoadMap";>GNOME's roadmap</ulink> details the developers' 
  plans for the next release cycle, and the <ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/start/unstable/";>GNOME &nextversion; release schedule</ulink> will appear soon.
 	</para>
+	
+	<para>Tomboy Online is also scheduled for GNOME 2.30 and will allow users to sync and access their
+	Tomboy Notes via the web.
+	</para>
 		
 
 </sect1>
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 2e39c01..37cbf0c 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 
 	 <para>
 	  GNOME's instant messaging and communication application, <application>Empathy</application>,
-	  based off the Telepathy communications framework,has gained a number of new and important features 
+	  based off the Telepathy communications framework, has gained a number of new and important features 
 	  for helping users communicate.</para>
 
 	 <para>
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
 	  <application>Cheese</application>, a webcam photo and video application, features numerous improvements.
 	  Cheese has an updated user interface, and has added a "Burst" mode for taking multiple pictures at a time.
 	  You can choose the number of pictures Cheese should take and the time delay between pictures.  Cheese
-	  also supports users being able to manually take a picture via their webcam's "Capture" button.
+	  also supports the ability manually take a picture via a webcam's "Capture" button.
 	 </para>
 	 
 	 <!-- fixme - add screenshot of cheese in burst mode -->
@@ -171,19 +171,13 @@
 
 	</sect2>
 
-	<sect2 id="rnusers.aboutme">
+	<sect2 id="rnusers.volume">
 	 <title>Fade In and Out</title>
 
 	 <para>
 	  GNOME Volume Control has added subwoofer and fade support for users with supported speakers.
 	  Also new is when changing settings, changes are now instantly applied.
 	 </para>
-	 <para>
-	  If a system is configurated for allowing fingerprint authentication, users
-		can enroll their fingerprints via
-		<menuchoice><guimenu>Desktop</guimenu><guimenu>Preferences</guimenu><guimenuitem>About
-		Me</guimenuitem></menuchoice> from the panel menu.
-	 </para>
 	 
 	 <!-- Fixme: Needs updated GNOME-Volume-Manager screenshot -->
 	 
@@ -195,8 +189,6 @@
 		</figure>
 	</sect2>
 
-	 
-	</sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="rnusers.cleanup">
 		<title>But Wait, There's Moreâ?¦</title>
@@ -211,7 +203,8 @@
 			Menus and buttons do not show icons by default.	
 			</para></listitem>
 			<listitem><para>
-			  Tomboy has moved the location of stored notes and configuration files to conform to Freedesktop.org specifications.
+			  Tomboy has moved the location of stored notes and configuration files to conform 
+			  to Freedesktop.org specifications.
 			</para></listitem>
 			<listitem><para>
 			  GNOME Power Manager now has support for laptops with multiple batteries and has added disk spindown support