release-notes r1079 - in branches/gnome-2-24: . help/C

[davyd svn gnome org]

Author: davyd
Date: Fri Sep 19 07:41:47 2008
New Revision: 1079
URL: http://svn.gnome.org/viewvc/release-notes?rev=1079&view=rev

Log:
2008-09-15  Davyd Madeley  <davyd madeley id au>

        * help/C/rnusers.xml:
        * help/C/rndevelopers.xml:
        - small fixes


Modified:
   branches/gnome-2-24/ChangeLog
   branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
   branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rnusers.xml

Modified: branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rndevelopers.xml	(original)
+++ branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rndevelopers.xml	Fri Sep 19 07:41:47 2008
@@ -74,8 +74,12 @@
  	<sect2 id="rndevelopers.glib">
 		<title>GLib &glibversion;</title>
 		<para>
+		 GNOME &gnomeversion; is the first version of GNOME release to depend on GLib &glibversion;.
+		</para>
+		<para>
 			GLib &glibversion; features better support for providing context
-			in string translations with C_() and NC_() macros.
+			in string translations with C_() and NC_() macros as well as additional
+			API in GIO.
 			<!-- FIXME, write more -->
 		</para>
 
@@ -90,14 +94,7 @@
 
 	<sect2 id="rndevelopers.gtk">
 		<title>GTK+ &gtkversion;</title>
-
-		<para>
-			As with GLib &glibversion;, GTK+ &gtkversion; requires that only top-level
-			headers (e.g. <filename>gtk.h</filename>,
-			<filename>gdk-pixbuf.h</filename>) are included in applications. For
-			maintaining compatibility with existing applications, read
-			<xref linkend="rndevelopers.glib.compat"/> above.
-		</para>
+		 GNOME &gnomeversion; is the first GNOME release to depend on GTK+ &gtkversion;.
 
 		<para>
 			A new class, <ulink

Modified: branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rnusers.xml
==============================================================================
--- branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rnusers.xml	(original)
+++ branches/gnome-2-24/help/C/rnusers.xml	Fri Sep 19 07:41:47 2008
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
 			The GNOME Project's focus on users and usability continues in GNOME &gnomeversion;
 			with its hundreds of bug fixes and user-requested improvements. The
 			sheer number of enhancements makes it impossible to list every change and
-			improvement made, but we hope to highlight some of the
-			more exciting user-oriented features in this release of GNOME.
+			improvement made, but these notes aim to highlight some of the
+			more exciting, user-oriented features in this release.
 	</para>
 
   <sect2 id="rnusers.empathy">