Re: Small patch for the documentation



Hi Phil,

Il giorno gio, 28/08/2008 alle 21.12 +0100, Phil Bull ha scritto:
> Thanks for the patch. I noticed a very small typo in the patch itself:
> 
> "+       To burn a data CD, proceed as follow:"
> should be:
> "+       To burn a data CD, proceed as follows:"
> 
> "+       To start this project, proceed as follow:"
> should be:
> "+       To start this project, proceed as follows:"

Thanks for the heads up!

By the way... there were others "as follow" to fix up. ;)

This patch should take care of them all + the previuos.

Cheers.

-- 
Milo Casagrande <milo_casagrande yahoo it>
Index: help/C/brasero.xml
===================================================================
--- help/C/brasero.xml	(revisione 1206)
+++ help/C/brasero.xml	(copia locale)
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
       </revision>
       <revision> 
 	<revnumber>Brasero Manual V2.0</revnumber> 
-	<date>Febrary 2008</date> 
+	<date>February 2008</date> 
 	<revdescription> 
 	  <para role="author">Milo Casagrande
 	    <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Create image files and burns from existing image files
+	  Create image files and burn existing image files
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -285,7 +285,7 @@
 	format and burns them to a CD which standard CD players can play.
       </para>
       <para>
-	To burn an audio CD proceed as follow:
+	To burn an audio CD proceed as follows:
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@
 	<title>Inserting a Pause</title>
 	<para>
 	  After you have added a track, you can insert a 2 seconds
-	  pause after it. To insert a pause, proceed as follow:
+	  pause after it. To insert a pause, proceed as follows:
 	  <orderedlist>
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@
 	<title>Splitting a Track</title>
 	<para>
 	  It is possibile to divide a track in multiple parts. To split
-	  a track proceed as follow:
+	  a track proceed as follows:
 	  <orderedlist>
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>
@@ -581,13 +581,13 @@
     <sect2 id="brasero-new-project-data">
       <title>Data Project</title>
       <para>
-	To burn a data CD:
+	To burn a data CD, proceed as follows:
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>Insert a blank CD-R/W or DVD-R/W into your drive.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>Click <guibutton>Data project</guibutton> in the
+	    <para>Click on <guibutton>Data project</guibutton> in the
 	    main window or choose 
 	    <menuchoice>
 	    	<guimenu>Project</guimenu>
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@
 	</note>
       </para>
       <para>
-	To create a video project, proceed as follow:
+	To create a video project, proceed as follows:
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@
       <title>Disc Copy</title>
       <para>
 	This project lets you take an existing disc and copy it to a
-	blank disc or image file. To copy a disc, proceed as follow:
+	blank disc or image file. To copy a disc, proceed as follows:
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
@@ -1166,7 +1166,7 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	To start this project:
+	To start this project, proceed as follows:
 	<orderedlist>
 	  <listitem>
 	    <para>
@@ -1633,7 +1633,7 @@
 	  <para>
 	    From the menu bar, choose <menuchoice>
 	      <guimenu>Tools</guimenu>
-	      <guimenuitem>Check integrity</guimenuitem>
+	      <guimenuitem>Check Integrity</guimenuitem>
 	    </menuchoice>, or press <keycombo>
 	      <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
 	      <keycap>F</keycap>

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