[gnome-user-docs] sound-nosound & sound-usespeakers marked final



commit 0753d7cc07584dabe6e8963388173340d0ece7a3
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Wed Sep 30 15:43:13 2015 -0400

    sound-nosound & sound-usespeakers marked final

 gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page |   13 +++++++------
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
index 4d55e99..a85ecd9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-29" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
index d62823d..c2dc1fd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.7.1" version="0.2" date="2012-11-16" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-30" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -34,13 +35,13 @@
 
   <p>You can use external speakers or headphones with your computer. Speakers
   usually either connect using a circular TRS (<em>tip, ring, sleeve</em>) plug
-  or with USB.</p>
+  or a USB.</p>
 
   <p>If your speakers or headphones have a TRS plug, plug it into the
   appropriate socket on your computer. Most computers have two sockets: one for
-  microphones and one for speakers. Look for a picture of headphones next to
-  the socket. Speakers or headphones plugged into a TRS socket will usually be
-  used by default. If not, see the instructions below for selecting the default
+  microphones and one for speakers (usually accompanied by a picture of headphones).
+  Speakers or headphones plugged into a TRS socket are usually used
+  by default. If not, see the instructions below for selecting the default
   device.</p>
 
   <p>Some computers support multi-channel output for surround sound. This
@@ -56,8 +57,8 @@
   <steps>
     <title>Select a default audio input device</title>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-introduction#activities">Activities</gui>
+      overview and start typing <gui>Sound</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click on <gui>Sound</gui> to open the panel.</p>


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