[bijiben] help: use logical steps on cut-copy-paste.page



commit d6e892d099f360c60c2eb093d0f336cc31f1e606
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Nov 28 21:27:24 2014 +0000

    help: use logical steps on cut-copy-paste.page
    
    The instructions didn't feel like they were telling the user how to
    achieve a realistic task, so reword it into a move text scenario

 help/C/cut-copy-paste.page |   22 +++++++++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page b/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page
index 4fc51a4..7cf448a 100644
--- a/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page
+++ b/help/C/cut-copy-paste.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#use"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.11" date="2014-01-28" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-11-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
@@ -17,22 +17,34 @@
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
  
    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Cut, copy and paste is simple to use.</desc>
+    <desc>Move text inside a note or to a different note.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Cut, copy and paste</title>
 
+  <p>You can move text inside a note or to another note by cutting or copying
+  it and pasting it somewhere else.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <title>To cut, copy or paste in a note:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select the text.</p>
     </item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui style="button">Cut</gui>,
-    <gui style="button">Copy</gui>
-    or <gui style="button">Paste</gui>.</p>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Cut</gui> or
+      <gui style="button">Copy</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select where you want to paste the text and press
+      <gui style="button">Paste</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 


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