[gnome-user-docs] Start updating accounts-* pages for 3.10

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 577c35db5ec23f8725c70128c816cab103d17707
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Sep 19 00:13:02 2013 +0100

    Start updating accounts-* pages for 3.10
    
    Update instructions for UI changes.

 gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page                 |   22 ++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page |   14 ++----------
 gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page                 |   11 ++++++++-
 gnome-help/C/accounts.page                        |    4 +-
 4 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page
index 07032a7..8f4ad5f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page
@@ -4,10 +4,12 @@
       id="accounts-create">
 
   <info>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts" />
 
-    <credit type="author">
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="candidate"/>
+
+    <credit type="author editor">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
@@ -30,6 +32,7 @@
   while adding it to <app>Online Accounts</app>. This allows you to manage all
   your online accounts from one application.</p>
 
+  <!-- Tested with Google -->
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Open the <app>Online Accounts</app> settings from the Activities
@@ -39,16 +42,13 @@
       <p>Click <gui style="button">+</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select an <gui>Account Type</gui> from the drop down menu. Some
-      account types may <link xref="accounts-provider-not-available">not be
+      <p>Select the type of account which you want to add. Some account types
+      may <link xref="accounts-provider-not-available">not be
       available</link>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Add…</gui> to continue.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Find and click the <gui>Sign Up</gui> button or link on the page which
-      appears.</p>
+      <p>If the service allows you to create an account, you should see more
+      information on how to do this.</p>
       <note>
         <p>Not all online account providers offer the option to create an
         account at this stage. If this is true of the service you wish to
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>All services that are offered by an account provider will be enabled
-      by default. <link xref="accounts-disable-service">Switch off</link>
-      individual services to disable them.</p>
+      by default. <link xref="accounts-disable-service">Switch</link>
+      individual services to <gui>Off</gui> to disable them.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page 
b/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
index ad80f99..50b714a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
@@ -20,19 +21,10 @@
     <desc>What if an online service provider is not listed?</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Why isn't my account type on the list?</title>
+  <title>Why is my account type not on the list?</title>
 
   <p>Support for your favorite online service provider needs someone to develop
-  it. Currently, only a few types of online accounts are supported:</p>
-
-  <list>
-    <item><p>Google</p></item>
-    <item><p>Windows Live</p></item>
-    <item><p>Facebook</p></item>
-    <item><p>Twitter</p></item>
-  </list>
-
-  <p>Support for Yahoo should be added in the near future.</p>
+  it. Only the account types that are listed are currently supported.</p>
 
   <note style="advanced">
     <p>If you're interested in adding support for other services, contact the
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
index 22151d5..7017442 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
@@ -8,13 +8,18 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="accounts-disable-service"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-15" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="draft"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Completely remove an online account.</desc>
+    <desc>Delete an online account.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Remove an account</title>
@@ -25,7 +30,7 @@
       overview.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the account you wish to remove.</p>
+      <p>Select the account which you wish to remove.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click the <key>-</key> button in the lower-left portion of the
@@ -42,4 +47,6 @@
     by your desktop.</p>
   </note>
 
+  <p>To remove GNOME's access to the online account, you should revoke the
+  access through the account's website or similar service.</p>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts.page
index dba8cdc..28e01d4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts.page
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@
 
   <title>Online accounts</title>
 
-  <p>You can enter your login details for some online services (like Google
+  <p>You can enter your login details for some online services (such as Google
   and Facebook) into the <app>Online Accounts</app> window. This will let you
-  easily access your calendar, mail, chat accounts, and similar from those
+  easily access your calendar, mail, chat accounts, and similar, from those
   applications without having to enter your account details again.</p>
 
 </page>