[gnome-dictionary/mallard-help] Submit definitions.page for review.



commit 8d489d492c3858792dfe90adeec291b847004942
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Fri Mar 22 09:27:45 2013 -0400

    Submit definitions.page for review.
    
    Reword help where necesseary.
    Reflow paragraphs.

 help/C/definition.page |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/definition.page b/help/C/definition.page
index c79a3f9..c38f1ad 100644
--- a/help/C/definition.page
+++ b/help/C/definition.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="definition">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-06" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-23" status="review"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
     <!--link type="guide" xref=""/-->
 
@@ -21,21 +21,21 @@
 
   <title>Look up definitions</title>
 
-  <p>Meanings of words define the etymology of words and its paralence. To look up definition of a word:</p>
+  <p>Meanings of words explain their origin, etymology, paralence and its
+  usage. To look up a definition:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Type the desired term in the text box next to <gui style="input">Look
-      up:</gui>.</p>
+      <p>In the input box next to <gui style="input">Look up:</gui>, type the
+      desired term.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p></p>
-
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>You can press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>T</key></keyseq> and view <link 
xref="similar-words">similar words</link> to your search term.</p>
+    <p>You can press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>T</key></keyseq> and view
+    <link xref="similar-words">similar words</link> to your search term.</p>
   </note>
 </page>


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