[release-notes/gnome-3-26] refine and expand users page

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit d15b9a94b9a7901d900f35b4d38173b35e9930c0
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 4 17:15:09 2017 +0100

    refine and expand users page

 help/C/index.page |   71 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 45 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 7fe0783..1bbf3a4 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -58,26 +58,26 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>GNOME 3.26 introduces a transformed Settings application. The
     previous grid of icons is gone and, in its place, a sidebar allows
-    switching between different areas.</p>
-    <p>The new sidebar makes it much easier and quicker to navigate the
-    settings application and places the most commonly used settings within easy
-    reach. It also means that the Settings window is now bigger and can be
-    resized, which can be more comfortable in a lot of situations.</p>
-    <p>GNOME's network settings have been improved as a part of this work:
-    Wi-Fi now has its own dedicated settings area and has more space and the
-    network settings dialogs have also been reworked, so that they are neater,
-    clearer and easier to use.</p>
+    switching between different areas. The new sidebar makes it much easier and
+    quicker to navigate the settings application and places the most commonly
+    used settings within easy reach. It also means that the Settings window is
+    now bigger and can be resized, which can be more comfortable in a lot of
+    situations.</p>
+    <p>GNOME's network settings have been improved as part of this work:
+    Wi-Fi now has its own dedicated settings area and network settings dialogs
+    have been reworked, so that they are neater, clearer and easier to use.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="color-emoji">
     <title>Color Emoji! 👍💎🍩🐈</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>Color emoji have arrived in GNOME! These will now be displayed in their
-    full-color glory wherever they appear and there are various ways to insert
-    them. This includes the <app>Characters</app> application, which allows you
-    to browse and search for emoji and copy them whenever you want. <app>Polari</app>,
-    the GNOME IRC client, also has a dedicated emoji picker and a similar tool
-    is being made available for other applications to use.</p>
+    full-color glory wherever they appear. Various ways to insert emoji have
+    also been introduced for GNOME 3.26. This includes the <app>Characters</app>
+    application, which now allows you to browse and search for emoji and to
+    copy them into messages and documents. <app>Polari</app>, the GNOME
+    IRC client, also has a dedicated emoji picker and a similar tool is being
+    made available for other applications to use.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="web-sync">
@@ -94,24 +94,39 @@
     <title>Redesigned Display Settings</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
     <p>GNOME's display settings have been redesigned for 3.26. The new design
-    aims to bring relevant settings to the forefront, so it is easy to get an
-    overview of how your displays are setup. When there are multiple displays
-    connected, a simple row of buttons allows you to choose how you want to use
-    them.</p>
-    <p>One major highlight is a new scaling setting, which allows the size of
-    controls and text on the screen to be adjusted. This makes it possible to
-    adjust the density of what's shown on your display in order to make it
-    comfortable to use.</p>
+    brings relevant settings to the forefront, so it is easy to get an overview
+    of how your displays are setup. When there are multiple displays connected,
+    a simple row of buttons allows you to choose how you want to use them.</p>
+    <p>The new display settings include a preview version of a new scaling
+    setting. This allows the size of what is shown on the screen to be adjusted
+    to match the density (often expressed as PPI or DPI) of your display,
+    resulting in the right amount of content being displayed, as well as making
+    it easy to read.</p>
+    <p>The display scaling feature is expected to mature in future releases.
+    For the best experience, Wayland is recommended over X11 (per-display
+    configuration is not supported on X11).</p>
   </section>
 
+  <section id="system-refinements">
+    <title>System Refinements</title>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
+    <p>There have been a number of highly visible visual refinements for GNOME
+    3.26. These include:</p>
+    <list>
+      <item><p>Windows now smoothly transition when they are maximized, unmaximized or snapped to one half 
of the screen. As well as looking good, this makes it easier to track what's happening on screen.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The size of window thumbnails has been increased in the Activities Overview, making it easier 
to pick the window you want.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The top bar now becomes transparent when there aren't any maximized windows. This is more 
attractive and gives a better sense of space.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The dialogs which inform you when an application isn't responding have a new style, making 
them look more integrated and refined.</p></item>
+    </list>
+  </section>
+
+
   <section id="thats-not-all">
     <title>And That’s Not All…</title>
     <p>As usual, there are also many other smaller improvements in this GNOME
     release. Here are some of them!</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p><app>Boxes</app>, the GNOME application for virtual and remote machines, now allows folders 
to be shared between a box and your computer.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The size of window thumbnails has been increased in the Activities Overview, making it easier 
to pick the window you want.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Windows now smoothly transition when they are maximized, unmaximized or snapped to one half 
of the screen. As well as looking good, this makes it easier to track what's happening on screen.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Boxes</app>, the GNOME application for virtual and remote machines, now allows folders 
to be shared between a box and your computer. To use this feature, just select which folders you want to 
share from the box settings, and they will appear as network locations in the guest.</p></item>
       <item><p>In <app>Software</app>, updates have been improved. They are now grouped by type and provide 
more accurate progress information when being installed.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Simple Scan</app>, the GNOME application for scanning images and documents, has had some 
interface improvements for 3.26. A new start screen provides some useful guidance, editing tools are easier 
to identify and preferences can be accessed from the header bar.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Logs</app> now groups similar messages together, which makes the history much shorter, 
making it easier to find what you're looking for.</p></item>
@@ -119,7 +134,11 @@
       <item><p>When you resize a filesystem in <app>Disks</app> it is now possible to also resize its 
partition, which often saves an extra task.</p></item>
       <item><p><app>Maps</app> has a collection of small improvements: there are new keyboard shortcuts, 
more information is shown about places and the last transportation method is remembered when plotting 
routes.</p></item>
       <item><p>GNOME's calendaring, contacts, to do and mail applications now perform better offline - many 
items can now be edited when you don't have an internet connection, and any changes will be uploaded the next 
time you are online.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The top bar now becomes transparent when there aren't any maximized windows. This is more 
attractive and gives a better sense of space.</p></item>s
+      <item><p><app>Photos</app> has new controls for zooming.</p></item>
+      <item><p>It is now possible to add and edit reoccuring events in <app>Calendar</app>.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Terminal</app> now highlights and makes it easy to open hyperlinks.</p></item>
+      <item><p>In <app>Evolution</app>, the new <gui>To Do</gui> bar allows you to view a list of upcoming 
events and tasks. Also, it is now possible to use <app>Evolution</app> without having a mail 
account.</p></item>
+      <item><p><app>Tweak Tool</app> has been renamed to <app>Tweaks</app> and has gained three new 
settings: a switch to control where application menus are shown, a <gui>Disable While Typing</gui> option for 
touchpads and an option to show the battery percentage in the top bar. There has also been a good amount of 
clean up and refinement.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>