[gnome-klotski] Review help

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit e99f6dba93abab0ed357275069adfbbcc664fb2d
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 9 21:24:03 2015 +0000

    Review help

 help/C/moves.page   |   13 +++++++++----
 help/C/puzzles.page |   17 ++++++++++++-----
 help/C/scores.page  |    7 ++++++-
 help/C/start.page   |   23 +++++++++++++++--------
 4 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/moves.page b/help/C/moves.page
index 445a685..5d244b5 100644
--- a/help/C/moves.page
+++ b/help/C/moves.page
@@ -6,13 +6,18 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="scores"/>
-    <revision version="3.14" date="2014-05-24" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="3.14" date="2015-01-28" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
       <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
@@ -30,9 +35,9 @@
 <section id="patterned-block-moves">
   <title>Goal piece moves</title>
 
-  <p>The goal location may be positioned slightly off the board. The
-  goal piece, which is the patterned block, can move to it. However, no
-  other blocks can move off the board.</p>
+  <p>The goal piece which is a patterned block has to move to the goal location.
+  The goal location may be positioned slightly off the board. However, no other
+  blocks can move off the board.</p>
 
 </section>
  
diff --git a/help/C/puzzles.page b/help/C/puzzles.page
index bd50913..95ea4be 100644
--- a/help/C/puzzles.page
+++ b/help/C/puzzles.page
@@ -7,13 +7,19 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="moves"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="scores"/>
-    <revision version="3.14" date="2014-05-24" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="3.14" date="2015-01-27" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
       <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
+
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
@@ -24,10 +30,11 @@
 
   <title>Puzzles</title>
 
-  <p>Puzzles are divided into three categories namely, <gui>HuaRong
-  Trail</gui>, <gui>Challenge Pack</gui> and <gui>Skill Pack</gui> based on the
-  difficulty level of the game. While the first and the last each contains nine
-  puzzles, the second one provides ten beautiful puzzles to the user.</p>
+  <p>Puzzles are divided into three categories namely, <gui>HuaRong Trail</gui>,
+  <gui>Challenge Pack</gui> and <gui>Skill Pack</gui> based on the difficulty
+  level of the game. <gui>HuaRong Trail</gui>  and <gui>Skill Pack</gui>
+  contains nine puzzles each and <gui>Challenge Pack</gui> consists of ten
+  beautiful puzzles.</p>
 
 <section id="navigate-puzzles">
   <title>Navigate among puzzles</title>
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index 9a37b97..05c6271 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -5,13 +5,18 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    <revision version="3.14" date="2014-05-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="3.14" date="2015-01-2" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
       <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
diff --git a/help/C/start.page b/help/C/start.page
index f513022..60cbdb2 100644
--- a/help/C/start.page
+++ b/help/C/start.page
@@ -8,13 +8,18 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="rules"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="keyboard-shortcuts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="puzzles"/>
-    <revision version="3.14" date="2014-05-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="3.14" date="2015-01-27" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Rashi Aswani</name>
       <email its:translate="no">aswanirashi19 gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">tyagishobha gmail com</email>
+      <years>2015</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
 
@@ -24,17 +29,18 @@
 
   <title>Start a new game</title>
 
-  <p><app>Klotski</app> offers a large collection of games, to play a new
-  game:</p>
+  <p><app>Klotski</app> offers a large collection of games.</p>
 
   <steps>
+  <title><p>To play a new game:</p></title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui style="menu">Klotski</gui> in the top bar.</p>
+    </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui style="menu">Klotski</gui> in the top bar, then select
-      <gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui>. Alternatively, you can click on
-      <gui style="button">Start Over</gui>. It will start a new game of the
-      default puzzle, <gui>Only 18 Steps</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">New Game</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
+  <p>Click <gui type="button">Start over</gui> to restart the current game.</p>
 
 <section id="play-different-puzzles">
   <title>Play a different puzzle</title>
@@ -45,7 +51,8 @@
       Puzzles</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Choose a game category and double click to start playing.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui type="button">Next Puzzle</gui> or
+      <gui type="button">Previous Puzzle</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>