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[gnome-user-docs] Review session-* for 3.14

commit 985f1cb272e0ec15eefb2767401bcb025c9823cf
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 22 09:44:58 2014 +0100

    Review session-* for 3.14
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=736997

 gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/session-formats.page     |   58 ++++++++++---------------
 gnome-help/C/session-language.page    |   77 +++++++++++++--------------------
 gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page |    4 +-
 4 files changed, 59 insertions(+), 84 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
index 8949804..cc27752 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-16" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -32,7 +33,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>You can log in to your system using a supported fingerprint scanner instead of typing in your 
password.</desc>
+    <desc>You can log in to your system using a supported fingerprint scanner
+    instead of typing in your password.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Log in with a fingerprint</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page b/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page
index 65e0e3c..8309a44 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="session-language"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.4" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -19,10 +20,10 @@
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
     <desc>Choose a region used for date and time, numbers, currency,
     and measurement.</desc>
-
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change date and measurement formats</title>
@@ -38,43 +39,30 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click on <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Formats</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select the region that most closely matches the formats you'd like
-    to use. By default, the list only shows regions that use the language set on
-    the <gui>Language</gui> tab. Click the <key>...</key> button to
-    select from all available regions.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Respond to the prompt, <gui>Your session needs to be restarted for
-    these changes to take effect</gui> by clicking
-    <gui style="button">Restart Now</gui>, or click <gui style="button">X</gui>
-    to restart later.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Formats</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the region and language that most closely matches the formats
+      you would like to use. If your region and language are not listed, click
+      <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/view-more-symbolic.svg"><span its:translate="yes">...</span></media></gui>
+      at the bottom of the list to select from all available regions and
+      languages.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Done</gui> to save.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Respond to the prompt, <gui>Your session needs to be restarted for
+      changes to take effect</gui> by clicking
+      <gui style="button">Restart Now</gui>, or click
+      <gui style="button">X</gui> to restart later.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>After you've selected a region, the area to the right of the list shows
+  <p>After you have selected a region, the area to the right of the list shows
   various examples of how dates and other values are shown. Although not shown
   in the examples, your region also controls the starting day of the week in
   calendars.</p>
 
-<!--
-  <section id="system">
-    <info>
-      <link type="seealso" xref="session-language#system"/>
-      <link type="seealso" xref="keyboard-layouts#system"/>
-    </info>
-    <title>Change the system formats</title>
-
-    <p>When you change your region for formats, you only change it for your
-    account after you log in. You can also change the <em>system formats</em>,
-    the formats used in places like the login screen.</p>
-
-    <steps>
-      <item><p>Change your formats, as described above.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Select the <gui>System</gui> tab.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Click <gui>Copy Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-      <item><p><link xref="user-admin-explain">Administrative privileges</link> are
-      required. Enter your password, or the password for the requested administrator
-      account.</p></item>
-    </steps>
-  </section>
--->
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
index 4213c9f..6cf3485 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-language"/>
-    <desc>Switch to a different language for user interface and help text.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -28,6 +28,9 @@
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>Switch to a different language for user interface and help
+    text.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change which language you use</title>
@@ -38,8 +41,8 @@
     to document software installation.</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>You can use your desktop and applications in any of dozens of languages, provided
-  you have the proper language packs installed on your computer.</p>
+  <p>You can use your desktop and applications in any of dozens of languages,
+  provided you have the proper language packs installed on your computer.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -49,21 +52,32 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click on <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
-    <item><p>Click <gui>Language</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select your desired language.
-    The initial list only shows a small subset of the supported languages.
-    If your language is not listed, click
-    <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/view-more-symbolic.svg"/>.
-    Some translations may be incomplete, and certain applications may not
-    support your language at all. Any untranslated text will appear in the
-    language in which the software was originally developed, usually American
-    English.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Respond to the prompt, <gui>Your session needs to be restarted for
-    these changes to take effect</gui> by clicking
-    <gui style="button">Restart Now</gui>, or click <gui style="button">X</gui>
-    to restart later.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui>Language</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select your desired region and language. If your region and language
+      are not listed, click
+      <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/view-more-symbolic.svg"><span its:translate="yes">...</span></media></gui>
+      at the bottom of the list to select from all available regions and
+      languages.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Done</gui> to save.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Respond to the prompt, <gui>Your session needs to be restarted for
+      changes to take effect</gui> by clicking
+      <gui style="button">Restart Now</gui>, or click
+      <gui style="button">X</gui> to restart later.</p>
+    </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>Some translations may be incomplete, and certain applications may not
+  support your language at all. Any untranslated text will appear in the
+  language in which the software was originally developed, usually American
+  English.</p>
+
   <p>There are some special folders in your home folder where applications
   can store things like music, pictures, and documents. These folders use
   standard names according to your language. When you log back in, you will
@@ -71,35 +85,4 @@
   your selected language. If you plan to use the new language all the time,
   you should update the folder names.</p>
 
-  <section id="system">
-    <title>Change the system language</title>
-
-    <p>When you change your language, you only change it for your account
-    after you log in. You can also change the <em>system language</em>, the
-    language used in places like the login screen.</p>
-
-    <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-      start typing <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click on <gui>Region &amp; Language</gui> to open the panel.</p>
-    </item>
-      <item><p>Click the <gui style="button">Login Screen</gui> button.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Click <gui>Language</gui>.
-      <link xref="user-admin-explain">Administrative privileges</link> are
-      required. Enter your password, or the password for the requested
-      administrator account.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Select your desired language.
-      The initial list only shows a small subset of the supported languages.
-      If your language is not listed, click
-      <media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/view-more-symbolic.svg"/>.
-      Some translations may be incomplete, and certain applications may not
-      support your language at all. Any untranslated text will appear in the
-      language in which the software was originally developed, usually American
-      English.</p></item>
-    </steps>
-  </section>
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
index f2170ab..62db6dd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-screenlocks.page
@@ -9,6 +9,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -25,7 +26,8 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Change how long to wait before locking the screen in the <gui>Privacy</gui> settings.</desc>
+    <desc>Change how long to wait before locking the screen in the
+    <gui>Privacy</gui> settings.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>The screen locks itself too quickly</title>
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