[gnome-user-docs] Review improvements added to disk-format.page



commit 66a9ddf30c87e42edf25d2389fbe9ceaba526610
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Fri Sep 5 22:21:07 2014 +0100

    Review improvements added to disk-format.page

 gnome-help/C/disk-format.page |   11 ++++++-----
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
index 352d955..58659b4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-format.page
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
   </item>
   <item>
     <p>In the toolbar underneath the <gui>Volumes</gui> section, click the
-    execute icon. Then click <gui>Format…</gui>.</p>
+    gear icon. Then click <gui>Format…</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
     <p>In the window that pops up, choose a file system <gui>Type</gui> for the
@@ -52,12 +52,13 @@
    will be presented as a label.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-    <p>Give the disk a name and click <gui>Format…</gui> to begin wiping the
-    disk.</p>
+    <p>Give the disk a name and click <gui>Format…</gui> to continue and show a
+    confirmation window. Check the details carefully, and click
+    <gui>Format</gui> to wipe the disk.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>Once the formatting has finished, <gui>safely remove</gui> the disk. It
-   should now be blank and ready to use again.</p>
+    <p>Once the formatting has finished, click the eject icon to safely remove
+    the disk. It should now be blank and ready to use again.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 


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