[gnome-user-docs] Review lockdown-repartitioning.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit ce54d4366243f592fb47f9b14c131c716142aa46
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Wed Dec 10 12:38:09 2014 +0000

    Review lockdown-repartitioning.page
    
    Use listings, code and cmd tags correctly. Touch up a few wording
    issues.

 system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page |   33 ++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page 
b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
index 1e71278..a93ac08 100644
--- a/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
+++ b/system-admin-guide/C/lockdown-repartitioning.page
@@ -5,21 +5,26 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-settings#lockdown"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-11-25" status="draft"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="dconf-lockdown" />
+    <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-12-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Jana Svarova</name>
       <email its:translate="no">jana svarova gmail com</email>
       <years>2014</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Prevent users from changing disk partitions.</desc>
+    <desc>Prevent the user from changing disk partitions.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Lock down repartitioning</title>
+  <title>Disable repartitioning</title>
 
   <p><sys>polkit</sys> enables you to set permissions for individual
   operations. For <sys>udisks2</sys>, the utility for disk management services,
@@ -29,16 +34,16 @@
   system administrator.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>Remember that <sys>polkit</sys> configuration in <file>/etc</file>
-    overrides that shipped by packages in <file>/usr/share</file>.</p>
+    <p>The <sys>polkit</sys> configuration in <file>/etc</file> overrides that
+    shipped by packages in <file>/usr/share</file>.</p>
   </note>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To prevent users from changing disks settings:</title>
+    <title>Disable repartitioning</title>
     <item>
       <p>Create a file with the same content as in
-      <file>/usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy</file>.</p>
-      <code>cp /usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy 
/etc/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy</code>
+      <file>/usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy</file>:
+      <cmd>cp /usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy 
/etc/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy</cmd></p>
       <note style="important">
         <p>Do not change the
         <file>/usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy</file>
@@ -50,7 +55,8 @@
       <code>policyconfig</code> element and add the following lines to the
       <file>/etc/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.udisks2.policy</file>
       file:</p>
-<screen><![CDATA[
+      <listing>
+<code><![CDATA[
   <action id="org.freedesktop.udisks2.modify-device">
      <description>Modify the disks settings</description>
      <message>Authentication is required to modify the disks settings</message>
@@ -60,7 +66,8 @@
       <allow_active>yes</allow_active>
     </defaults>
 </action>
-]]></screen>
+]]></code>
+      </listing>
       <p>Replace <code>no</code> by <code>auth_admin</code> if you want to
       ensure only the root user is able to carry out the action.</p>
     </item>
@@ -69,8 +76,8 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>When the user tries to change the disks settings, the following message is
-  presented:</p>
-  <code>Authentication is required to modify the disks settings</code>
+  <p>When the user tries to change the disk settings, the following message is
+  shown: <gui>Authentication is required to modify the disks
+  settings</gui>.</p>
 
 </page>