[gnome-user-docs] Update user-* pages for 3.10



commit 34ec0a4f1697e2b4baa588d2fd72d742a74f77a1
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Nov 1 19:50:43 2013 +0000

    Update user-* pages for 3.10
    
    Remove user-addguest because it is not possible to have guest accounts
    at this time.

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page                         |   63 ++++++++++----------
 .../{user-addguest.page => user-addguest.page.old} |    5 ++
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page                |   31 ++++++----
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page              |   46 ++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page               |   25 +++++++-
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page                      |   33 +++++++----
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                             |    1 -
 7 files changed, 131 insertions(+), 73 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 50e6fce..4d00e29 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -7,10 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-addguest"/>
 
-    <!-- Setting 3.4.0 version to final for release, but we need to do something
-         about the various comments in here, so incomplete for 3.4.1.
-    -->
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -24,6 +22,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -71,22 +73,24 @@
   each person in your household or company. Every user has their own home
   folder, documents, and settings.</p>
 
+  <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
+  to add user accounts.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator
-      privileges</link> to add user accounts. Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the
-      top right corner and type your password or the administrator password, as
-      prompted.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
+      type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the
-      <gui style="button">+</gui> button to add a new user account.</p>
+      <p>Press the <gui style="button">+</gui> button, below the list of
+      accounts on the left, to add a new user account.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you want the new user to have
@@ -97,35 +101,30 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Enter the new user's full name. The username will be filled in
-      automatically based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you
-      can change it if you like.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Add</gui>.</p>
+      automatically based on the full name. If you do not like the proposed
+      username, you can change it.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>The account is initially disabled until you choose what to do about
-      the user's password. Select the new account from the list. Under
-      <gui>Login Options</gui> click <gui>Account disabled</gui> next to
-      <gui>Password</gui>. Select <gui>Set a password now</gui> from the
-      <gui>Action</gui> drop-down list, and have the user type their password
-      in the <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields.
-      See <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>.</p>
-      <p>You can also click the button next to the <gui>New password</gui>
-      field to select a randomly generated secure password. These passwords are
-      hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so be
-      careful.</p>
+      <p>You can chose to set a password for the new user, or let them set it
+      themselves on their first login. You can press on the
+      <gui style="button"><media type="image" src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" width="16" 
height="16">generate
+      password</media></gui> icon to automatically generate a random
+      password.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>Add</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <p>If you want to change the password after creating the account, select the
+  account, <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> the panel and press on the current
+  password status.</p>
+
   <note>
-    <p>In the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window you can click the image next to
-    the user's name on the right to set an image for the account. This image
-    will be shown in the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can
-    use, or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
+    <p>In the <gui>Users</gui> panel, you can click the image next to the
+    user's name to the right to set an image for the account. This image will
+    be shown in the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use,
+    or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page.old
similarity index 96%
rename from gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
rename to gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page.old
index b368163..651c622 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page.old
@@ -32,6 +32,11 @@
 
   <title>Add a guest user account</title>
 
+  <comment>
+    <cite date="2013-11-01">Kat</cite>
+    <p>It's not possible to have a guest user in 3.10</p>
+  </comment>
+
   <p>You can create a user account for guests, people who will only use the
   computer on a brief, temporary basis. The guest user will be able to use the
   programs on your computer, but they won't be able to access your files,
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index 30841c8..90bcad6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -8,11 +8,16 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain" />
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -26,33 +31,37 @@
   privileges and which ones don't. They are a good way of keeping your system
   secure and preventing potentially damaging unauthorized changes.</p>
 
+  <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
+  to change account types.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-      name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> and enter your password to unlock the account
-      settings. (To give a user admin privileges, you must have admin
-      privileges yourself.)</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
+      type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the user whose privileges you want to change.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the label <gui>Standard</gui> next to <gui>Account type</gui>
+      <p>Click the label <gui>Standard</gui> next to <gui>Account Type</gui>
       and select <gui>Administrator</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Close the User Accounts window. The user's privileges will be changed
-      when they next log in.</p>
+      <p>The user's privileges will be changed when they next log in.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note>
-    <p>The first user account on the system is usually the one that has admin
-    privileges. This is the user account that was created when you first
-    installed the system.</p>
+    <p>The first user account on the system is usually the one that has
+    administrator privileges. This is the user account that was created when
+    you first installed the system.</p>
     <p>It is unwise to have too many users with <gui>Administrator</gui>
     privileges on one system.</p>
   </note>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 15cc600..b7cad2c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-goodpassword"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,6 +18,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -55,23 +60,26 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-      name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
+      type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the label next to <gui>Password</gui>.</p>
-      <note>
-        <p>The label should look like a series of dots or boxes if you already
-        have a password set.</p>
-      </note>
+      <p>Click the label <gui>·····</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Enter your current password, then a new password. Enter your new
       password again in the <gui>Confirm password</gui> field.</p>
-      <p>You can also click the button next to the <gui>New password</gui>
-      field to select a randomly generated secure password. These passwords are
-      hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so be
-      careful.</p>
+      <p>You can press on the
+      <gui style="button"><media type="image" src="figures/system-run-symbolic.svg" width="16" 
height="16">generate
+      password</media></gui> icon to automatically generate a random
+      password.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p>
@@ -81,6 +89,16 @@
   <p>Make sure you <link xref="user-goodpassword">choose a good
   password</link>. This will help to keep your user account safe.</p>
 
+
+  <note>
+    <p>When you update your login password, your login keyring passwork will
+    automatically be updated to be the same as your new login password.</p>
+  </note>
+
+  <p>If you forget your password, any user with administrator privileges can
+  change it for you.</p>
+
+<!-- The login keyring password is updated automatically nowadays.
 <section id="changepass">
   <title>Change the keyring password</title>
 
@@ -88,9 +106,9 @@
   <em>keyring password</em>. The keyring keeps you from having to remember lots
   of different passwords by just requiring one <em>master</em> password to
   access them all. If you change your user password (see above), your keyring
-  password will remain the same as your old password. <!-- When you next log
+  password will remain the same as your old password. <!- - When you next log
   in, you will be asked to update your keyring password. If you prefer to
-  change the keyring password (to match your login password) immediately: -->
+  change the keyring password (to match your login password) immediately: - ->
   To change the keyring password (to match your login password):</p>
 
   <steps>
@@ -125,6 +143,6 @@
     </if:choose>
   </note>
 
-</section>
+</section>-->
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index 3d587db..e10b19c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -16,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -29,10 +34,22 @@
   image of your own. You can even take a new login photo with your
   webcam.</p>
 
+  <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
+  to edit user accounts other than your own.</p>
+
+
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-      name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>If you want to edit a user other than yourself, press
+      <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type in your
+      password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click the picture next to your name. A drop-down gallery will be shown
@@ -41,11 +58,11 @@
       <list>
         <item>
           <p>If you'd rather use a picture you already have on your computer,
-          click <gui>Browse for more pictures</gui>.</p>
+          click <gui>Browse for more pictures…</gui>.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <p>If you have a webcam, you can take a new login photo right now by
-          clicking <gui>Take a photo</gui>. Take your picture, then move and
+          clicking <gui>Take a photo…</gui>. Take your picture, then move and
           resize the square outline to crop out the parts you don't want. If
           you don't like the picture you took, click <gui>Discard photo</gui>
           to try again, or <gui>Cancel</gui> to give up.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index d216235..8afb87b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -7,6 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-01" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -24,6 +25,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -32,29 +37,35 @@
 
   <title>Delete a user account</title>
 
-  <p>You can add multiple user accounts to your computer. See
-  <link xref="user-add"/> to learn how. If somebody is no longer using
-  your computer, you can delete that user's account.</p>
+  <p>You can <link xref="user-add">add multiple user accounts to your
+  computer</link>. If somebody is no longer using your computer, you can delete
+  that user's account.</p>
+
+  <p>You need <link xref="user-admin-explain">administrator privileges</link>
+  to delete user accounts.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
-      name to open the <gui>Users</gui> window.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Users</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Users</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type your
-      password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to delete
-      user accounts.</p>
+      <p>Press <gui style="button">Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and
+      type in your password when prompted.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the user you want to delete and click the
-      <gui style="button">-</gui> button.</p>
+      <p>Select the user that you want to delete and press the
+      <gui style="button">-</gui> button, below the list of accounts on the
+      left, to add a new user account.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Each user has their own home folder for their files and settings. You
       can choose to keep or delete the user's home folder. Click <gui>Delete
       Files</gui> if you're sure they won't be used anymore and you need to
-      free up disk space. These files are permanently deleted. They can't be
+      free up disk space. These files are permanently deleted. They cannot be
       recovered. You may want to back up the files to an external drive or CD
       before deleting them.</p>
     </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index e972520..ff46274 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -385,7 +385,6 @@ HELP_FILES = \
        translate.page \
        user-accounts.page \
        user-add.page \
-       user-addguest.page \
        user-admin-change.page \
        user-admin-explain.page \
        user-admin-problems.page \


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