[gnome-user-docs] Edit introuction of Documents.

[Julita Inca <jinca src gnome org>]

commit ff32239bb61bbb07788af09aa6636a7bd2650f7e
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 13 16:25:25 2012 -0500

    Edit introuction of Documents.

 gnome-help/C/documents.page |   29 +++++++++++------------------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/documents.page b/gnome-help/C/documents.page
index cb25d1a..f3dcb34 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/documents.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/documents.page
@@ -23,9 +23,6 @@
 	Documents
   </title>
 
-
-
-
   <comment>
     <cite date="2012-02-20" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
     <p>This assumes the reader knows how to use <em>GoogleDocs</em>. By the end of this page,
@@ -35,32 +32,28 @@
        - Explain that it's not really the same as a file browser
        - Explain that it can connect to remote documents</p>
   </comment>
-
+read and store information about the documents on the system
   <p><app>Documents</app> is an application of <em>GNOME</em> that lets you
-   organize all type of documents. Supported formats are PDF, DVI, XPS, 
-   PostScript and all the formats supported by Evince, Microsoft Office, 
-   Libreoffice files and Google Docs.</p>
+   read, store and organize information about the documents you have created. 
+   Supported formats are PDF, DVI, XPS, PostScript and all the formats supported
+   by Evince, Microsoft Office, Libreoffice files and Google Docs.</p>
 
   <p>All the documents you have in your computer locally will be automatically       	
    presented when you open <app>Documents</app>, as well documents you have been
    worked remotely by using <em>Google Docs</em>. This is possible if you have
    configured an <link href="accounts.page">online account</link> before.</p>
 
-  <p>You can manage documents using <app>file browser</app>, but 
-  <app>Documents</app> can do more than arrange items by name, size, type or           	 
-   modification date. This application is only focus in documents you have;
-   photos, videos or music are not consider to be managed here.
-   This is integrated with functionalities like  
+  <p>  You can manage documents using <app>file browser</app> as well as pictures,
+  videos or music; but <app>Documents</app> can do more than 
   <link href="documents-print.page">printing</link>, 
   <link href="documents-collection-send.page">sharing</link>,
   <link href="documents-search.page">searching</link>, 
   <link href="documents-sort.page">sorting</link>, 
-  <link href="documents-favorite.page">setting favorites</link>, 
-  and you can read your documents full screen, without the distracting of tools 
-  or menus other applications have.</p>
-
-  <p><app>Documents</app> provides you reminders of the documents you have to 
-  read, <link href="documents-collections.page">make collections</link> and 
+  <link href="documents-favorite.page">setting favorites</link>.
+  With <app>Documents</app>, you can read your documents full screen, 
+  without the distracting of tools or menus other applications have.  It also 
+  provides you reminders of the documents you have to read, 
+  <link href="documents-collections.page">make collections</link> and 
   <link href="documents-location.page">identify</link> your documents so quickly
   through the previous thumbnail.</p>