[release-notes/gnome-3-2] I wouldn't say 'follow our progress' but rather 'us'



commit cd5944e3acfbac88f7bd5dadf9514573e1fc8ce2
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 20:20:13 2011 +0200

    I wouldn't say 'follow our progress' but rather 'us'

 help/C/release-notes.xml |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index 109da99..d056c4e 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -57,16 +57,16 @@
         great software available to all. GNOME's focus is ease of use, 
         stability, first-class internationalization as well as accessibility
         support. GNOME is Free and Open Source Software. This means that 
-        all our work is free to use, modify and redistribute. Follow our
-        progress on <ulink url="http://identi.ca/gnome";>Identi.ca</ulink>,
+        all our work is free to use, modify and redistribute. Follow us
+        on <ulink url="http://identi.ca/gnome";>Identi.ca</ulink>,
         <ulink url="https://twitter.com/GNOME";>Twitter</ulink> or <ulink
           url="https://www.facebook.com/GNOMEDesktop";>Facebook</ulink>.
       </para>
       <para>
         If you would like to help make our products even better, 
-        <ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/JoinGnome";>join us</ulink>. We're
-        always in need of more people who can translate from English, assist
-        with marketing or do development.
+        <ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/JoinGnome";>join us</ulink>. We
+        always welcome more people who can translate from English, assist
+        with marketing, write documentation, test, or do development.
       </para>
       <para>
         You can also support us financially by becoming a <ulink



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