[release-notes/gnome-3-2] mallard: you instead of impersonal 'users'as we're already in the user section



commit b18a97e934300882bb1da5dd999fc2599459f83e
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Mon Sep 12 11:54:14 2011 +0200

    mallard: you instead of impersonal 'users'as we're already in the user section

 help/C/rnusers.xml |    6 ++++--
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index a497291..a80dd4b 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -318,8 +318,10 @@
 	<sect2 id="user-docs">
 	  <title>Documentation That Really Helps You</title>
     <para>
-      Traditional user documentation is written like a paper book, but users often just want to find out quickly how to perform a certain task. 
-      The following applications have received new task-oriented user documentation and help: 
+      Traditional user documentation is written like a paper book, but you
+      often just want to find out quickly how to perform a certain task. The
+      following applications have received new task-oriented documentation
+      and help:
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>
           The accessibility explorer <application>Accerciser</application>;



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