[release-notes/gnome-3-2] reorder sections and slightly reword some text



commit 348506a4085c6157b6343928f38a4e972c0d5ecc
Author: Olav Vitters <olav vitters nl>
Date:   Sun Sep 11 01:19:33 2011 +0200

    reorder sections and slightly reword some text

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   74 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------
 1 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 9f23087..f188855 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@
   <sect2 id="messaging">
     <title>Messaging Built In</title>
     <para>
-      You know longer have to start a specific application to be signed in to
-      your favourite chat and messaging services - from &gnomeversion;, GNOME 3
-      will do it for you.
+      No longer a seperate application has to be started to be sign in to
+      chat and messaging services - from &gnomeversion;, GNOME 3 will do it for
+      you.
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
@@ -184,11 +184,35 @@
     </figure>
   </sect2>
 
-	<sect2 id="shell">
-	  <title>Shell Extensions</title>
-    <para>TODO: extensions website support slowly getting in place: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2011-August/msg00199.html - need to check status; maybe LookForward section?
+	<sect2 id="documents">
+	  <title>Manage your Documents</title>
+    <para>
+      TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
+      http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
     </para>
-	</sect2>
+    <para>
+      When dealing with a lot of documents, it can be hard to keep track of
+      them. In GNOME &gnomeversion;, the Documents application is focussed on
+      providing a simple and effective way to find, organize and view documents.
+    </para>
+    <figure id="fig.users.documents1">
+     <title>Documents screenshot</title>
+      <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
+        <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-local.png" format="PNG"/>
+      </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
+    </figure>
+    <para>
+      Thanks to the <application>Online Accounts</application> integration,
+      finding documents is the same, no matter if the document is stored locally
+      or online.
+    </para>
+    <figure id="fig.users.documents2">
+     <title>Documents showing online documents</title>
+      <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
+        <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-google.png" format="PNG"/>
+      </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
+    </figure>
+  </sect2>
 
 	<sect2 id="sushi">
 	  <title>Quickly Preview your Files in the File Manager</title>
@@ -281,36 +305,6 @@ TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordp
     </para>
   </sect2>
 
-	<sect2 id="documents">
-	  <title>Manage your Documents</title>
-    <para>
-      TODO: http://live.gnome.org/Design/Apps/Documents ||
-      http://blogs.gnome.org/cosimoc/2011/08/30/introducing-documents/
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      When dealing with a lot of documents, it can be hard to keep track of
-      them. In GNOME &gnomeversion;, the Documents application is focussed on
-      providing a simple and effective way to find, organize and view documents.
-    </para>
-    <figure id="fig.users.documents1">
-     <title>Documents screenshot</title>
-      <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
-        <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-local.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
-    </figure>
-    <para>
-      Thanks to the <application>Online Accounts</application> integration,
-      finding documents is the same, no matter if the document is stored locally
-      or online.
-    </para>
-    <figure id="fig.users.documents2">
-     <title>Documents showing online documents</title>
-      <screenshot><mediaobject><imageobject>
-        <imagedata fileref="&urlfiguresbase;gnome-documents-google.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject></mediaobject></screenshot>
-    </figure>
-  </sect2>
-
   <sect2 id="beautification">
     <title>Even more beautiful</title>
     <para>
@@ -346,6 +340,12 @@ TODO: Integrated contacts search - is this in for 3.2? - https://afaikblog.wordp
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
 
+	<sect2 id="shell">
+	  <title>Shell Extensions</title>
+    <para>TODO: extensions website support slowly getting in place: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=654770 / https://mail.gnome.org/archives/desktop-devel-list/2011-August/msg00199.html - need to check status; maybe LookForward section?
+    </para>
+	</sect2>
+
 	<sect2 id="misc">
     <title>But Wait, There's Moreâ</title>
     <para>



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