[cheese] fix some grammar errors in the documentation
- From: Daniel G. Siegel <dgsiegel src gnome org>
- To: svn-commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [cheese] fix some grammar errors in the documentation
- Date: Mon, 14 Sep 2009 18:00:16 +0000 (UTC)
commit df5539e68974f9cbd7d86e231cb33ae9aaf534e1
Author: daniel g. siegel <dgsiegel gnome org>
Date: Mon Sep 14 19:59:46 2009 +0200
fix some grammar errors in the documentation
help/C/cheese.xml | 24 +++++++++++++-----------
1 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/cheese.xml b/help/C/cheese.xml
index a9d2e03..6bbfe79 100644
--- a/help/C/cheese.xml
+++ b/help/C/cheese.xml
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
<!--
(Do not remove this comment block.)
Template Maintained by the GNOME Documentation Project:
- http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gdp
+ http://developer.gnome.org/projects/gdp
Template version: 2.0 beta
Template last modified Feb 12, 2002
-->
@@ -25,14 +25,15 @@
<title>&application; Manual</title>
<abstract role="description">
<para>
- &application; is a video and photo shoot program that for webcams
- (or other cameras) and can do some cool effects.
+ &application; uses your webcam to take photos and videos, applies
+ fancy special effects and lets you share the fun with others.
</para>
</abstract>
<copyright>
- <year>2007,2008,2009</year>
+ <year>2007-2009</year>
<holder>daniel g. siegel (dgsiegel gnome org)</holder>
<holder>Jaap A. Haitsma (jaap haitsma org)</holder>
+ <holder>Filippo Argiolas (fargiolas gnome org)</holder>
</copyright>
<!-- translators: uncomment this:
@@ -49,6 +50,7 @@
document. -->
<publisher role="maintainer">
<publishername>Joshua Henderson (joshhendo gmail com)</publishername>
+ <publishername>Felix Kaser (f kaser gmx net)</publishername>
</publisher>
&legal;
@@ -164,7 +166,7 @@
To report a bug or make a suggestion regarding the &app; application or
this manual, follow the directions in the
<ulink url="http://projects.gnome.org/cheese/"
- type="http">&application; Contact Page</ulink>.
+ type="http">&application; project page</ulink>.
</para>
<!-- Translators may also add here feedback address for translations -->
</legalnotice>
@@ -191,8 +193,8 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- &app; is a video and photo shoot application with cool effects
- for the <systemitem>GNOME desktop</systemitem>.
+ &app; uses your webcam to take photos and videos, applies
+ fancy special effects and lets you share the fun with others.
</para>
</section>
@@ -217,9 +219,9 @@
</figure>
<para>
- Especially for &app;-users with small displays like the ones in netbooks we have designed
- another view. The more horizontally aligned, so it does fit better on small widescreen displays.
- The wide-view is showed in the screenshot below.
+ Especially for &app;-users with small displays, like the ones in netbooks, we have designed
+ another view. It is more horizontally aligned, in order to fit better on small widescreen displays.
+ The wide-view is shown in the screenshot below.
</para>
<figure>
@@ -259,7 +261,7 @@
<para>
You are able to select numerous effects to apply to your photo. To apply
- an effect, just click on the effect that you want. The button will appear highlighted.
+ an effect, just click on the effect you want. The button will appear highlighted.
Selecting multiple effects will apply all the effects to
your image (for example, if you apply <guibutton>Hulk</guibutton> and
<guibutton>Vertical Flip</guibutton>, the
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