[empathy] [help] Minimal proofreading, deferring some reviews to after 2.28.0
- From: Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>
- To: svn-commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [empathy] [help] Minimal proofreading, deferring some reviews to after 2.28.0
- Date: Wed, 9 Sep 2009 16:39:19 +0000 (UTC)
commit a64a6378eb3098be9e51d1dda253f7fb0c4c1fa3
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date: Wed Sep 9 11:38:39 2009 -0500
[help] Minimal proofreading, deferring some reviews to after 2.28.0
help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page | 11 ++++++++---
help/C/geolocation-privacy.page | 15 ++++++++++-----
help/C/geolocation-supported.page | 11 ++++++++---
help/C/geolocation-turn.page | 11 ++++++++---
help/C/geolocation-what-is.page | 29 ++++++++++++++++-------------
help/C/geolocation.page | 12 ++++++++----
help/C/group-conversations.page | 11 ++++++++---
help/C/salut-protocol.page | 7 ++++++-
help/C/send-file.page | 13 +++++++++----
help/C/send-message.page | 13 +++++++++----
10 files changed, 90 insertions(+), 43 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page b/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page
index 845f7e7..bbf6e54 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-not-showing.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="geolocation-not-showing">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="geolocation-not-showing">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="geolocation#problems"/>
<desc>
<app>Empathy</app> does not publish my geographical position.
</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page b/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
index 23694e2..de5a5b2 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-privacy.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="geolocation-privacy">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="geolocation-privacy">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
<desc>
What information are sent and to who.
</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -19,10 +24,10 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Geolocation privacy</title>
+ <title>Geolocation Privacy</title>
<section id="info-sent">
- <title>What are the information sent</title>
+ <title>What information is sent</title>
<p>
What is possible to send is: your country, region, locality, area, street, building,
floor, room, and postal code, longitude, latitude and altitude, speed and bearing.
diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-supported.page b/help/C/geolocation-supported.page
index f67b437..73c2ea1 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation-supported.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-supported.page
@@ -1,12 +1,17 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="geolocation-supported">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="geolocation-supported">
<info>
<desc>
Services that supports geolocation and compatibility.
</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="draft">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-turn.page b/help/C/geolocation-turn.page
index 6c01be9..984a281 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation-turn.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-turn.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="geolocation-turn">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic" style="task"
+ id="geolocation-turn">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
@@ -8,7 +9,11 @@
<desc>
How to activate and deactivate geolocation in <app>Empathy</app>.
</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page b/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page
index 77fcff8..2e8163b 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation-what-is.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="geolocation-what-is">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="geolocation-what-is">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="geolocation#geoloc"/>
@@ -8,7 +9,11 @@
<desc>
Understanding geolocation.
</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -22,36 +27,34 @@
<title>What is geolocation</title>
- <p>
- With <em>geolocation</em> it is intended the possibility to identify the real
- geographical position of a computer or a device connected to the Internet.
- </p>
+ <p>Geolocation allows you to identify the real geographical location of a
+ computer or a device connected to the Internet.</p>
<p>
With geolocation in <app>Empathy</app> you can:
</p>
<list>
<item>
<p>
- Publish your geographical position to your contacts.
+ Publish your geographical location to your contacts.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- See your contacts geographical position and quickly contact them.
+ See your contactsâ?? geographical location and quickly contact them.
</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Set the accuracy of your position and the device used to discover your
- position.
+ Set the accuracy of your location and the device used to discover your
+ location.
</p>
</item>
</list>
<note style="tip">
<p>
- In order to see your contacts geographical position, they need to use a
- service and an application that support geolocation.
+ In order to see your contactsâ?? geographical locations, they need to use a
+ service and an application that supports geolocation.
</p>
</note>
diff --git a/help/C/geolocation.page b/help/C/geolocation.page
index 409d22f..bdb9640 100644
--- a/help/C/geolocation.page
+++ b/help/C/geolocation.page
@@ -1,14 +1,18 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="guide"
- id="geolocation"
- style="2colum">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="guide" style="2column"
+ id="geolocation">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
<desc>
Use and understand geolocation in <app>Empathy</app>.
</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-19" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-01" status="done"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/group-conversations.page b/help/C/group-conversations.page
index df779e7..5955f90 100644
--- a/help/C/group-conversations.page
+++ b/help/C/group-conversations.page
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="group-conversations">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="group-conversations">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#text-conv"/>
@@ -9,7 +10,11 @@
</desc>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-02" status="stub"/>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="draft"/>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-17" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/salut-protocol.page b/help/C/salut-protocol.page
index 274e84e..5577814 100644
--- a/help/C/salut-protocol.page
+++ b/help/C/salut-protocol.page
@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
id="salut-protocol">
@@ -8,7 +9,11 @@
Undesrtanding the People Nearby feature.
</desc>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-12" status="draft"/>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Milo Casagrande</name>
<email>milo ubuntu com</email>
diff --git a/help/C/send-file.page b/help/C/send-file.page
index cd1d6ea..90d17ea 100644
--- a/help/C/send-file.page
+++ b/help/C/send-file.page
@@ -1,13 +1,18 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="send-file">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="send-file">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
<desc>Send a file from your computer to one of your contacts.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-14" status="draft"/>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-07-21" status="draft"/>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
<email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -33,7 +38,7 @@
<list>
<item>
<p>
- Right-click on the contact you want to send a file, and choose <gui>Send file</gui>.
+ Right click on the contact you want to send a file to, and choose <gui>Send file</gui>.
</p>
</item>
<item>
diff --git a/help/C/send-message.page b/help/C/send-message.page
index bdcfe69..49ee856 100644
--- a/help/C/send-message.page
+++ b/help/C/send-message.page
@@ -1,12 +1,17 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic"
- id="send-message">
+ xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
+ type="topic"
+ id="send-message">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#text-conv"/>
<desc>Send a message to one of your contacts.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-06-14" status="draft"/>
- <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.2" date="2009-08-14" status="review">
+ <!--
+ <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-09" status="deferred"/>
+ -->
+ </revision>
<credit type="author">
<name>Phil Bull</name>
<email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -28,7 +33,7 @@
<list>
<item>
<p>
- Double-click the name of the contact that you want to have a conversation
+ Double click the name of the contact that you want to have a conversation
with.
</p>
</item>
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