rajiv vyas wrote: Rajiv,
Couple of other suggestions. You need some flavor and answer couple of questions in the text before your Q&A. The flavor: Where is Macedonia, how big it is in terms of populations, per capita GDP, and why do we say that nothing happens there. A good way to say it would be something like this: "While China's GDP has increased on an average by xx% in the past 10 years, Macedonia has trailed at xx%."
I've added a few more sentences about Macedonia and accepted most of your suggestions (they are now colored black) but I really couldn't compare China's GDP per capita to Macedonia's GDP because China's is $5600 and Macedonia's $7100 (last info from CIA's world fact book). :)
I can't think of a developing country (already not developed) to compare Macedonia to...
Questions you need to answer: Why Warty and why open source. Feel free to post again and I can look at it over the weekend.
I think that there's an answer to that in the part why "Ubuntu and GNOME?" and the question about FOSS, it's also there, it's the second one from the end of the text..
Thank you for all the suggestions I really appreciate it. -Arangel PS I've attached the text with all the changes.
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