Attached is the latest. I broke up some sentences, killed some adjectives, and cleaned up some wording. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to find a source for the first quote; frankly I had no time to look. Because the quote is about interaction with 'outside' communities like gstreamer, perhaps you could do that with your fluendo/gstreamer hat on, Christian? Appears readable in OOo 1.1, but for some reason it takes up quite a bit more space, not sure what to do about that. Anyway, if everyone could proof it for a few hours and then, I guess, hand off to the translators, that would be great... Luis (who has on his TODO 'get more real marketers involved in the 2.12 release') On Tue, 22 Feb 2005 14:22:06 +0100, Murray Cumming <murrayc murrayc com> wrote: > This is a draft of our press release for GNOME 2.10, for marketing-list > to comment on. This is absolutely definitely not for release yet, so I > don't want to see links to it all over the web. The attachment is an > OpenOffice document. > > I'm not a PR person, so I'm prepared for all kinds of constructive > criticism. > > At the moment, I'm thinking of removing the bug-fix count because I > think it's not a meaningful thing to most people, and will do more harm > than good. > > -- > Murray Cumming > murrayc murrayc com > www.murrayc.com > www.openismus.com > > > -- > marketing-list mailing list > marketing-list gnome org > http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list > > > >
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