Re: [guadec-list] Yellow vs Blue

[Murray Cumming <murrayc murrayc com>]

On Fri, 2006-02-17 at 10:21 +0100, Quim Gil wrote:
> The links are a bit hidden in the wiki page:
> 
> http://live.gnome.org/GUADEC2006_2fSponsorsBrochure?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=GUADEC-Sponsor-Brochure-blue.pdf
> http://live.gnome.org/GUADEC2006_2fSponsorsBrochure?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=GUADEC-Sponsor-Brochure-yellow.pdf

I only looked quickly, but I saw two small typos:
"is found is the least likely of places"
should be 
"is found in the least likely of places"

(Nevermind that we probably shouldn't be telling people that GNOME
shouldn't be expected to be where GNOME is. "some surprising places"
would be slightly better.)

"two (2) speaking slot"
should be 
"two (2) speaking slots"

Also, while I'm at it:
- I'd prefer if we didn't mention "GNU Network Object Model
Environment". It's silly and irrelevant and not really true.
- Mark Shuttleworth should be mentioned as the Ubuntu Founder. That's
much more interesting than "HBD Venture Capital".

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