Re: The GNOME Journal, April Edition

[Jim Hodapp <james hodapp gmail com>]

Claus,

    I few mistakes in the release notes which I will show below:

On Apr 21, 2006, at 10:57 AM, Claus Schwarm wrote:

> Hello, GNOME Journal Lovers!
>
> The April edition of the GNOME Journal is out! We're a little bit  
> late,
> due of a dreamy meeting of the release organizer with a few eastern
> bunnys. :-)
>
> Many thanks to all writers, editors, and helpers!
>
> As usual, the following announcement will be sent to the marketing  
> list
> and footnotes.org if grammer and spelling seems ok to the native
> speakers.
>
> "
>
> The GNOME Journal, April Edition
>
> The latest issue of the GNOME Journal has just been published. It
> features insights into the Portland Project, gained from a conversion

make the previous sentence: "features insights into the Portland  
Project which were gained from a conversation

> with one of its lead architects, Waldo Bastian, an introduction to
> GNOME's new deskbar, an interview with Elijah Newren, GNOME's releaser

releaser should be release.

> manager, and three tricks for designing application interfaces you
> should know. Writers of this edition are Sri Ramakrishna, Davyd

make the previous sentence: "should know. Writers in this edition  
include Sri Ramakrishna, Davyd"

> Madeley, Lucas Rocha, and Claus Schwarm, respectively.
>
> The GNOME Journal features original content and commentary for and by
> the GNOME community. All articles are published under the Creative
> Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 2.0 license.
>
> http://www.gnomejournal.org/
>
> "
>
> Have fun reading!
>
> Claus
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