unclear wording, mentioning the gerund doesn't help
- From: Alan Horkan <horkana maths tcd ie>
- To: docs gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: unclear wording, mentioning the gerund doesn't help
- Date: Thu, 27 Jan 2005 20:17:46 +0000 (GMT)
The documentation style guide said this was the place to send feedback
http://developer.gnome.org/documents/style-guide/titlepage.html
The following section of the Documentation style guide concerns me:
http://developer.gnome.org/documents/style-guide/infodesign-2.html
Use parallel construction in headings of the same level. For example, if
you use a gerund to start one heading, use a gerund to start all headings
of the same level in the section.
Correct: To Open a File
To Save a File
To Edit a File
Incorrect: Opening a File
To Save a File
Edit a File
Gerund is certainly an interesting word but I do not believe it is a word
that most native English speakers are necessarily familiar with but I do
know that it is a fancy way of saying "-ing words".
I think it is not a good idea to use the term and I think the writer is
showing off how good they are at grammar, particularly since the
example does not actually use a gerund.
I hope you can rephrase this section.
Sincerely
Alan Horkan
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