[gnome-db] libgda docs patch



- removed space after RedHat and Debian links (was hyperlinking the
extra space)
- s/for doing so/to do so/
- wrapped shell commands in a <PROGRAMLISTING /> tag to follow the
common style
- s/about our example/for our example/ (could also be "in regards to our
example")

C.J.


? libgda.patch
Index: doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/libgda/doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.39
diff -u -u -r1.39 libgda-docs.sgml
--- doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml	13 Dec 2002 17:33:41 -0000	1.39
+++ doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml	8 May 2003 16:28:27 -0000
@@ -259,12 +259,13 @@
     <sect1 id="installation-introduction">
       <title>Introduction</title>
       <para>
-        On our web site, <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com"; type="http">RedHat
-        </ulink> and <ulink url="http://www.debian.org"; type="http">Debian
-        </ulink> packages are available, so you shouldn't have any problem
-        installing it. For a standard installation, there is are no further
-        steps, but, you'd better know configuration
-        options, just in case you come across a non-standard installation, or 
+        On our web site, <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com";
+        type="http">RedHat</ulink> and <ulink
+        url="http://www.debian.org"; type="http">Debian</ulink>
+        packages are available, so you shouldn't have any problem
+        installing it. For a standard installation, there is are no
+        further steps, but, you'd better know configuration options,
+        just in case you come across a non-standard installation, or
         in case of problems during a standard installation.
       </para>
     </sect1>
@@ -277,13 +278,13 @@
       </para>
       <para>
         If you downloaded the source code (in a tarball), you must
-        compile the software. For doing so, once you have unpacked
+        compile the software. To do so, once you have unpacked
         the source tree, you must:
-        <screen>
-          <prompt>$</prompt><userinput>./configure</userinput>
-          <prompt>$</prompt><userinput>make</userinput>
-          <prompt>$</prompt><userinput>make install</userinput>
-        </screen>
+        <PROGRAMLISTING>
+          <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>./configure</userinput>
+          <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>make</userinput>
+          <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>make install</userinput>
+        </PROGRAMLISTING>
       </para>
       <para>
         This will generate the makefiles for your specific platform,
@@ -583,7 +584,7 @@
         <para>
           The &XML; configuration file (<filename
 	  class="directory">~/.libgda/config</filename>) is not
-	  recommended to be modified by hand and, about our example, it is
+	  recommended to be modified by hand and, for our example, it is
 	  something like this:
         </para>
 	<programlisting>


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