[gnome-db] libgda docs patch
- From: "C.J. Collier" <cjcollier colliertech org>
- To: Gnome-db List <gnome-db-list gnome org>
- Subject: [gnome-db] libgda docs patch
- Date: 08 May 2003 09:29:29 -0700
- removed space after RedHat and Debian links (was hyperlinking the
extra space)
- s/for doing so/to do so/
- wrapped shell commands in a <PROGRAMLISTING /> tag to follow the
common style
- s/about our example/for our example/ (could also be "in regards to our
example")
C.J.
? libgda.patch
Index: doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/libgda/doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.39
diff -u -u -r1.39 libgda-docs.sgml
--- doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml 13 Dec 2002 17:33:41 -0000 1.39
+++ doc/C/libgda-docs.sgml 8 May 2003 16:28:27 -0000
@@ -259,12 +259,13 @@
<sect1 id="installation-introduction">
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>
- On our web site, <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com" type="http">RedHat
- </ulink> and <ulink url="http://www.debian.org" type="http">Debian
- </ulink> packages are available, so you shouldn't have any problem
- installing it. For a standard installation, there is are no further
- steps, but, you'd better know configuration
- options, just in case you come across a non-standard installation, or
+ On our web site, <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com"
+ type="http">RedHat</ulink> and <ulink
+ url="http://www.debian.org" type="http">Debian</ulink>
+ packages are available, so you shouldn't have any problem
+ installing it. For a standard installation, there is are no
+ further steps, but, you'd better know configuration options,
+ just in case you come across a non-standard installation, or
in case of problems during a standard installation.
</para>
</sect1>
@@ -277,13 +278,13 @@
</para>
<para>
If you downloaded the source code (in a tarball), you must
- compile the software. For doing so, once you have unpacked
+ compile the software. To do so, once you have unpacked
the source tree, you must:
- <screen>
- <prompt>$</prompt><userinput>./configure</userinput>
- <prompt>$</prompt><userinput>make</userinput>
- <prompt>$</prompt><userinput>make install</userinput>
- </screen>
+ <PROGRAMLISTING>
+ <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>./configure</userinput>
+ <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>make</userinput>
+ <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>make install</userinput>
+ </PROGRAMLISTING>
</para>
<para>
This will generate the makefiles for your specific platform,
@@ -583,7 +584,7 @@
<para>
The &XML; configuration file (<filename
class="directory">~/.libgda/config</filename>) is not
- recommended to be modified by hand and, about our example, it is
+ recommended to be modified by hand and, for our example, it is
something like this:
</para>
<programlisting>
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